Anatra

Because to give a real explanation I’d need to tell practically half his entire plotline, so it’d have to go on the spoiler page.

@e-m-trepke

Aha! That makes……….ooo, that’s beautiful…..

@godlyfantasy12

Do you want the long and detailed version, or the short and boring one?

Short version: a child indirectly woke up his conscience, then he basically gave his life to save a bunch of kids from the prison camps where he’s a guard.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Another corridor opened in front of them. Good. They were well out of the tower by now.

Not that those guards behind them couldn’t follow…

Nyx’s voice broke in on his mental calculations. In his head. Is there no peace even in my mind? He sighed and resigned himself to the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I sort of am? But I won’t be for too long.

I’m also trying to minimize my time spent on media, so if I’m a bit unsteady on here, that’s why.

@godlyfantasy12

AAGHHH!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!

Don’t do this-please don’t do this!!! I need these charies as they are in the book! Not…

Evil maniacs.

This is crazy. I mean, good character development, or course. 😉

Come to think of it though…no matter the situation, any character can become the villain of their own story. What true…[Read more]

Alyona

It was astonishing how much Franz changed when his daughter there.

It was also astonishing how offense the term “child” was to at least two in the group. Alyona suspected that Vulkasin had practiced a rare bit of self control.

And had he really called her a lady? She pinched her lips together to try to stifle her sudden humor.

“Ah, a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76  @koshka

I’m thinking that after November wakes up, or around that time, I’ll bring in my crazy side character. He would probably not stay with the group, but rather get them moving along and provide amble opportunity for conversation/fluff. He’s a hilarious old meddler.

As for the questions, first off, Ocran…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@koshka

Y’all, Y’ALL, Y’AAALLLLLL!!

I’m a little excited about how this is going.

So, there’s a scene much later in Heir of Ashes that has Viktor and *cough* Fritz stuck in a ravine, waiting for rescue because both boys are rather battered from a recent encounter with bitterness personified. And Fritz is…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

First off, I am furious about your WIP. I love those characters too much to see them turn villains!!!

Secondly, that’s awesome. I love the character development. It’s so brilliant!

Just don’t be mad if I kidnap your characters out of your AU. 😉

(Just kidding, of course. It really is awesome.)

@freedomwriter76

Yayyy!!!!!!!! I’m so glad!

And also, just to clear things up, the lines

This day is life come where only death has dwelled. Rise up servant, warrior reborn. Rise up child, son of the Highest King.

Were supposed to be in italics, because that’s the King speaking.

@joy-caroline @freedomwriter76 (RIKER!!!) @godlyfantasy12 (Thank you! It means a lot to know you find it so. 🙂 ) @koshka

So, I promised a while back that I’d share this scene, but I had a lot left undone in it at the time. Now, while it’s still extremely rough and subject to change depending on how the story falls out, it is complete.

So, here…[Read more]

@joy-caroline.  @koshka. @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy1

So, y’all, I need some thoughts on this scene in my rough draft. Does it make sense? Do I say too much or too little? It’s rough draft, so not my best writing, but I really need some thoughts on it.

(And I still need to plot and pray over Lennet, Alwin’s mother. I’m not quite sure about…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ahhh, I love all the scenes you shared!

(Even though I am a touch mad at the cliffhanger. 😉 )

November is so sweet and perfectly awkward. I sympathize very much. XD and Ara…. Oh Ara.

And yes, Riven is dooming himself to major rewards…. But definitely not the nice kind!

And I think Ganesh us becoming a favorite character…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Vulkasin folded his arms and stared at the man, standing in his full hight.

Children? Did that man insinuate that he was a child, without an ability to contribute to the Pack? Not even a youth, a person of seven years or more, thus belonging to the tribe although not full gr…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wow. That was…so…

*Internal weeping*

@folith-feolin

GAHHH! ANOTHER TWIN?!

Ah, excuse me. I haven’t properly introduced myself yet.

I am Koshka, a homeschooler, historical nerd, and writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy and/or other stuff. A lot of other stuff.

Now, I am also a twin, my sister and I being Identical. I get a tad bit excited when I meet others who share similar…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Hopefully they do…still not sure how it ends though, so-

*Gasp*

NOT ARA THE VILLIAN?!

The world is no longer safe. XD

@freedomwriter76

I know…(feeling mildly sorry for them but also too satisfied to save them)

@godlyfantasy12

Oh course we want to read yours!!! I was hoping you’d put them on here.

Here we go…

Chapter One

“David.”

Scritch, scritch. Daithí’s pencil kept moving across his page, copying out the report with perfect flaws.

“David Loranson.”

The lad beside him shifted uncomfortably, his creaky bench the only sound in the now silent…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Ah, so um…are we supposed to put our AU chapters on here?

@godlyfantasy12

*Mad cackles*

Those two are kinda my favorites too…only Daithí and Reúven are the most developed characters so they have a different sort of pull on my heart.

Yes, poor lads.

@freedomwriter76

Hmm, well as I ca…[Read more]