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@godlyfantasy12

Aha!! I’ve been wondering who that fourth pair in your pic was! Well, she’s obviously Corvina, but him? Hmmm…

Ooo, ouch. Does he work through being klepto?

Wait.

Does she know?

@godlyfantasy12

(*Whispered* I think It’s your turn…unless I need to put one in for Mikkel? I’m not sure what I’d say for him though.)

@godlyfantasy12

Alright, I will then.

*Cracks knuckles*

@godlyfantasy12

I did,did it go through? I’m seriously wondering if it didn’t. It should be on the previous page.

@godlyfantasy12

I understand! But you’ll get there! Her character is so sweet and just good.

And this has helped me with my characters too. A lot.

By the way, there’s hope! Legolas is said to be Tolkein’s least developed character, and yet if someone is going to have a secret favorite, it’s probably him. (Secret because they never seem to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

YES!!!!!! Oh, it hurts so much, like when I read all the times Jonathan literally snuck out to see David and encourage him… And I know what happens in the end… And I just want to cry.

Especially when I think, Does that still happen today?

(Oh, and Corvina’s collage is really good! I think it’s so interesting how you can…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I CAN SEE NOW!!!

*Gasp*

No. Corvina’s mother tried to…to…aagghhh!!!

I’m beginning to despise that woman.

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, so Luna…

Has slowly been becoming my favorite. I know I know like near nothing about her, but… She’s still climbing up there.

@freedomwriter76

(Thank you! I think she’ll keep her name. Lol.) Oh, I love the story (especially the story’s theme. That is deeply beautiful.) and the collages! The kiddos are very sweet.

I think I like Leon’s better, just because his childhood coloring is literally my own, so… It’s kinda interesting to see. XD but Riker’s big blue eyes are…[Read more]

I don’t know if this will go through, but KP is being… interesting right now. In my email notifications I can see that y’all have posted on here, but whenever I try to swap over to the forum it has the same castle as earlier, with is probably a page lats, at this point…

Ugh. I’m trying to figure it out.

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@e-m-trepke @koshka

All righty! Let’s get this end started.

Also, I think I might poof Viktor too, because then I could add in Reúven, and I really want to see those two together. Plus, I realized that I do need to develop the later version of him.

But then again, I COULD ADD ALWIN INSTEAD. And if I added him, I’d hav…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

That’s so sad! But understandable, especially as they don’t have much of an influence on any of the plots, unlike Charn.

Oh, yeah. That happens to me a lot.

@godlyfantasy12

Oooo!!!! I can hardly wait!

And I’m thinking of sticking in Annia, although that means I’ll probably be removing one of my other charies. (She’s a side character, but I love writing from her pov…and she only gets about three in the book)

@e-m-trepke

I think Riker saved him? And as for a dog whistle…um…does a perfect imitation of a wolf howl work?

@mineralizedwritings

You should absolutely read it! And yes, EXACTLY. If there isn’t hope for afterward, it makes it feel like the whole plot just isn’t worth it. (Then again, I did enjoy Resistance by Jennifer A. Neilson, but even then, it was a story of a girl learning to hope, not the other way around, even though there were times when she…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Interesting. I have always loved Narnia because of it’s allegories.

But then, If there’s no point to the madness, or book no matter the genre but especially fantasy, I don’t want to read it.

@whalekeeper

EXACTLY. He’s one of the best characters in the series, in my so very humble opinion.

@mineralizedwritings

It could, although it would be a rather dark book. It would be interesting, but I’m afraid I was always far more intrigued by the Western Wilds.

YES! XD Definitely one of his best character names. (Now I’m wondering, did he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

His brother was in the thick of it, sword flashing with complete mastery, his face tense but otherwise calm. Zlatan was a Desanik. Vulkasin hadn’t seen his brother in battle, not like this.

This was more than a fight. This was a battle, a war. And he was a Volk. The war cry…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You don’t sound pushy to me! 🙂 I understand; I like this too.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h
Ok, so it started to rain, and as much as I love music, I love rain more. So, I can write now, since rain-song doesn’t interrupt my words like lyrics do.

Viktor

There was a sound, just a faint one carried to them by some unfelt draft from far down the passage.

A cry?

Riker knew. He spun away,…[Read more]