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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@goldyfantasy12 @keilah-h
It has no language or sexual content (that is something I’m very strict about). It’s adventures of a sister and brother and their journies growing up and crossing the lands. It doesn’t have gory violence, but there are many battles. It’s no more violent than the LoTR. I wrote it for teens.
There’s no strict deadline :)…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@devastate-lasting okay all good. let me know if you want to at some later point too, if not I totally understand
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Elfwing started the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
Hi y’all!! so, I’m looking for beta readers, as betrayed by the title.
I’m not sure if you like fantasy or not, but if you do then this is a good opportunity for it!! I do not have a strict dead-line, but I’d love some feedback by the end of the year to see if I need to make any major changes…
I’m gonna tag some people, and since I don’t know…[Read more]
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ella posted an update 5 years ago
@imwritehere1920 your website is adorable! SOOO cute! And of course, so is your bunny XD
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ella replied to the topic I am will starke. i do indeed be him! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
@will_starke Those shades are dope if anything is.
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ella replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Hey @akbaer ! Sorry I’m late… Welcome to KP! I am Ella and I love writing dystopian fiction, drinking tea, playing sports, and drawing flowers. And I have an irrational fear of falling into the murky river near our house. *cough* *smiles, wondering if we can still be besties* XD
Excuse me if these questions have already been asked, bu…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Like I said it’s first draft so there are repeated word choices like utter shock XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Kaunon has been into a lot of scrape and survived by the skin of his teeth, the scares are from fire battles and a nasty sand dragon that tried to eat him and when that didn’t work it tried to crush him 😂
here is the meeting of Alinnas parents
Gaol kept flying north, and after a few hours of steady flight, passed the m…
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Kaunon has gotten into many scrape and mostly to save dear little Alinna and both of them get into trouble… they’re royals kids, they have little experience with real life outside their homes… the ones you n his face are from protecting Alinna and his friends from a nasty dragon/monster
and here is the first meeting of A…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@scoutfinch108
Kaunon has gotten into many scrape and mostly to save dear little Alinna and both of them get into trouble… they’re royals kids, they have little experience with real life outside their homes… the ones you n his face are from protecting Alinna and his friends from a nasty dragon/monster
and here is the first meeting of A…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years ago
Ohhh I love Secret Garden, it’s a lovely book! I should read it again! Who’s your favourite character? I love the robin redbreast.
Children of Hurin is worth the read when you have time! for most people i know who have said that it’s intimidating it’s usually the writing style; it’s like reading an old history textbook for fun.…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 5 years ago
This guy sounds fascinating! His backstory is awesome, and he sounds like a genuine character. For likeability, you could:
1)Â Give the MC and Ridley something in common (a hobby, a genre of music, a favorite food, etc)
2) like @elfwing said, moments of vulnerability. That would make the reader open up to him really fast…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 5 years ago
sorry it keeps eating my reply, so if you get like, five responses you can blame the website i guess? XD
@godlyfantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 5 years ago
@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 5 years ago
@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 5 years ago
@godly-fantasy well…. *breathes out
I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both sides.
(So maybe have scenes with him being open with Jocelyn at…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@scoutfinch180 Hi! Thanks for the input. I’ll see how I can improve it for sure! 🙂 I’m not really into emotional scenes of this kind but these two have a special relationship, so I wanted to add it. And this is the first draft which is why there may be repeating words, and thank you for mentioning that as I sometimes forget that kind of stuff X…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years ago
@kathleenramm oh man good question! I haven’t actually sat down and read a book in months. I’ve been busy with moving across the country and renos and now moving again XD
I’ve listened through the Hobbit and LOTR several times in the last year in audiobook. The last book I actually held in my hands and read was Children of Hurin. Man, that is a…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@gracie-j ok! good to know XD, thanks!
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@gracie-j yeah I’d say it is KP because that’s happening to me tooat first it scared me because I thought maybe my computer had a virus or something, XD but I tried my phone and it did the same thingÂ
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@nova21
Hi Ella! Thanks so much visiting! Glad you like it.
Aww, thanks! We have wild bunnies in our backyard and we feed them during the summer. Sometimes, if you hold really still, and squat down low, they’ll come close enough to take their picture! 🙂 Do you have any wildlife around your house?
That’s awesome! I love trying to take pics of wildlife (but it can be pretty frustrating bc most animals don’t appreciate it 😉) I live in the south so we get a lot of reptilian things… XD Snakes, lizards, even scorpions! Not as cute as bunnies, but still pretty interesting. XD In the mornings on my way to school I often see deer too. And…[Read more]
@nova21
Haha! My mom got a camera awhile back and has been trying to take pictures of our hummingbirds. Yeah, if only wildlife would cooperate!
We live out in the country, so we see snakes and lizards too. One four foot gopher snake just slithered by like nobody’s business, and weirdly, two quail were marching behind him …. why? Not sure 🤷…[Read more]
That’s so cool! That’s hilarious, quail marching behind him? LOL! I know, scorpions are just… freaky. I found a dead one in our pool and I didn’t go in for about a week! XD I don’t think I’ve been able to get a pic of deer bc it’s basically “ooo, look, a deer!” and everyone’s like “where?” then I’m like “nevermind, it’s gone.” XD I will…[Read more]
Yikes! I know, right? One time, I went to our bedroom closet, turned, and BOOM! One was sitting there on the wall! I heard a pastor refer to scorpions as sneaky. Yep. Definitely sneaky!
Haha! Yeah, it’s like that in our family. We’ll be driving along, someone sees a deer, and by then it’s gone. I hope you get that picture someday!
Cool!…[Read more]
Oh that’s terrifying! Thanks 😉
Awesome! My favorite subject last year was geometry and this year I’m really looking forward to biology. I didn’t have a great experience in my literature class but I think this year will be great.