Aislinn Mollisong

@daeus @jess-penrose thank youuuu! 😀 I’m keeping all your guys’ tips in mind

@kaya-young thanks! <3

@sam-kowal thanks so much! Yes, I’m working through watching those videos and trying to understand it all 🙂

@rochellaine Nope. the only time I’ve heard that word is in Newsies, but it is a fun word. Though I think it’s slightly too comical for the situation 😀

Actually, I like the term “swells”, it is a bit old-fashioned, but I think it works with the more slang way of speaking the lower class would have. It’s also the term Enjolras uses to describe…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool, okay. 😀

Well, point one, I’m trying to think of a term I could use instead of the word “Aristocrat”, something which conveys a similar meaning, and that the revolutionaries could use contemptuously.

Secondly, could I ask you some questions about my novel?

Hey, anyone around. I’m writing ;D @jess-penrose @jane-maree @anyone

@rochellaine I know it’s Sunday for you, but maybe you’re around for discussions?

@alia I guess coming up with a melody and lyrics really. I want to be able to put the song to music from my piano or guitar too.

@ariel-ashira I’ll probably post some songs when I come up with them 🙂

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@filewriterbase13x Yay! I’ll try to get to this Monday or Tuesday 🙂

@rochellaine  Welp.  I gotta go again.  Byeee!

@rochellaine  Same as yesterday.  The sequel for my fantasy WIP.  🙂  Wbu?

@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

*creeps into forum* I have a couple more prompts. *rubs hands together*

“I’m tougher than I look.”

“Good, because you look like a kitten with the heart of a marshmallow.”

In the future, everyone wears glasses that allow them to see warnings the government issues about people. You’re in a bookstore one night when you glance at a shy-looking…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking *waves*

@ashlyvye I think it would be really cool to have the POV character actually be the “bad guy” for most of the story, then switch sides part way through. If you switched to mostly Macx POV, I think you would lose a lot of that.

On another note, it sounds like from your description that Haylie is actually the protagonist…[Read more]

@ashlyvye I was recently talking about POVs with my fellow writer friend (Hi, @princessfoo ! *waves*) and something she pointed out about multiple POVs is that one is often more interesting than the other. So, the question is, is Macx’s POV more interesting to readers than Haylie’s? Will they wish you would switch back to Haylie’s more often, or…[Read more]

@catwing XD

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@rochellaine

Second degree burns. Fun  😉

Do not apply lotions, ointment or fats to the burn for starters, just so we have that out of the way.

Do  not remove any clothing or jewellery stuck to the burn either.

Holding a burn under running water is the best way to treat it. If there isn’t any running water, pouring water over the wound will d…[Read more]

@Rochellaine

Okay, I can see that. We don’t have to argue about it 😛 You’re probably right, so I’ll have a look at it and work out how to change it. After all, it’s only one sentence, not a whole chapter thing 😀

@skredder

I’m going to post it once I’ve eaten lunch 🙂

I often work on short stories between working on novels, I find it lots of fun trying to condense a story into so few words (most of my short stories are under 2000 words)

They’re great for experimenting too!

@Rochellaine

Yep I got your comment. I’ll have to reread the section though. I…[Read more]