Hannah

Yes! Any opposed? *glances happily around* No?
Good.
*slams gavel down on desk with resounding crash* MOTION PASSES!!!!!

@kate-flournoy Your reaction… I’m grinning my face off right now. XD I’ll definitely post some more. (Though I can’t promise that stopping spot will be much better… 😉 )

@daeus and @adry_grace That was my biggest concern on the scene. Bad guy dialog isn’t really my strong point. 😛 I shall work on that.

Thanks for catching the typos,…[Read more]

Quid?! What?! @daeus

Hahahaha! I guess that’s a good thing . . . I think. Wow, that is just awesome. Words are failing me. 😉

@aella , chocolate is just dandy, thank you very much! 🙂

Quid?! What?! @daeus

Hahahaha! I guess that’s a good thing . . . I think. Wow, that is just awesome. Words are failing me. 😉

Thanks, @daeus , 🙂 but my question was actually about my bio, whether I include it in the body of my email or attach it. Do you know? I suppose maybe I’m fussing too much about the details, but I want to get it right . . .

@Daeus ah. My bad. 🙂 I do see how that could be better, now that you mention it.

Reading through you guys’ comments, I’m seeing a lot about the German characters’ stilted speech, so I may be the one who’s wrong here, but I kinda got the impression it was supposed to be that way because they couldn’t speak proper English. @writefury I am mistaken?

Aw, thanks guys for showing up to support me. 🙂 @hope @daeus @aella @sarah-h

However, this may all have been a false alarm, because I read it again, and I’m fairly certain now that I misunderstood it the first time, and 21 year-olds can submit those things, just not after twenty-one.

See? If you click directly on “Get Published!” you can…[Read more]

Aw, thanks guys for showing up to support me. 🙂 @hope @daeus @aella @sarah-h

However, this may all have been a false alarm, because I read it again, and I’m fairly certain now that I misunderstood it the first time, and 21 year-olds can can submit those things, just not after twenty-one.

See? If you click directly on “Get Published!” you can…[Read more]

What about you, @spradlin ? Do you know? I have a submission that’s simply rotting among the other dusty drafts in my inbox, waiting to be sent . . .

What about you, @spradlin ? Do you know?

A dragon who saves the princess from the knight.

Or a dragon who has to save the prince from the princess. 😉

I’ve pages of story ideas…here are a few.

Mirrors; two reflection worlds. The will of a person is on one side, and their emotions on the other. The wall separating the two parts of one girl start to break down and she discovers…[Read more]

@overcomer It looks like the submission guideline page is under construction or something because it’s not showing up anymore. 😉 But the KP team had talked about putting a 21 age limit on stories and so that’s probably what they’ve done. There aren’t age limits on articles though.

But…I should ask. Maybe KP could post one story a month from…[Read more]

@writefury, I like it! I mean, I like them…the stories ideas, that is. 🙂

Oh, stop! You made my empathy kick in. *sobs miserably* But I can’t write with you, I’ve got singing…. Quick, someone come and write with @daeus.

Yes it was a recent critique. You can read the rest of it in the Short Story forum.

*sigh* @writefury

@daeus I won’t be able to join you today in writing as I’ll be out. Sorry.

@Daeus YES. I have surprised myself over and over again with the realization of what I was doing. Mostly it was with dialogue tags, actually— said furiously, shouted angrily, etc. etc. While there’s not anything particularly WRONG with those, it sounds better if I say ‘snapped’ or ‘screamed’, and it also lets the reader draw their own…[Read more]

ACK!!!!!!!!!! ACK ACK ACK GIVE ME THE REST GIVE ME THE REST I WANT TO SEE JEAN’S FACE WHEN SHE REALIZES COBALT IS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!! *collapses in nervous wreck on floor, melts into tears*

No complaints. Absolutely no complaints— just one thing, and it’s not really something badly done as much as it is something that could have been done…[Read more]