Allison

@highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Update: In case anyone was wondering, since it’s been a while since I posted ch1, I am still working on chapter 2. It has been slowed down by unforeseen difficulties that I’m trying to solve, and the fact that I had to delete a few pages that weren’t good as a result. It might be a while yet, but once…[Read more]

@loopylin

The board looks great!

Acharis

He wasn’t dead. That was good, at least.

Acharis found Iris’ gaze discomforting. The layer of wood over his face didn’t feel like enough protection as she appeared determined to bore holes through it with her eyes. He looked away and reminded himself that she could not see his irritation and fear. Not f…[Read more]

@loopylin oooh i like it

@whalekeeper @rae

Sniper

This room was someone else’s. A child’s.

I’m no kid expert, but even I knew the scrap metal on the floor looked like a hazard.

“Sometimes you wonder… what’ve you done? And it’s hard for you to be good without h…hurting inside your head, and hurting my… hm. Yourself.” Lucy whispered.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Have you had any time to work on that drawing? No rush if you haven’t, just checking.

@rae

That looks pretty good! A chart made for roleplaying is a good idea. I appreciate the large bio section because I like having the freedom to add what I want. It’s also a good idea to have one chart with space for art, and another without.

Also also – I already knew that Baron fact! Not sure how I learned it before this.

The hobbies chart i…[Read more]

@loopylin

These characters need to reach a checkpoint where they sleep and eat. Who knows how Mel has made it this long

@rae

Oh no… :'[ That’s the worst… Especially when you worked on it for so long. Hopefully you can remember some of what you wrote.

@loopylin when I fill out pronouns sections I usually either keep it blank or do something silly like “who cares” or “pronoun preference wasn’t a thing in this time period” (for my tf2 squad especially) and then if it has a separate blank for the actual gender then I write it there. For example, here’s one for the friendship between Huntress an…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @loopylin

Lucille

Gabriel didn’t say anything. Lucy didn’t expect him to. The feelings tumbling around were enough to confuse anyone, most of all herself.

So she hugged him tighter.

Another door blossomed out of the wall behind Gabriel’s back. A worn brass knob was attached to it, and faded yellow paint covered the birch…[Read more]

@rae

Honestly, Gabriel needs to work through those emotions.

Hold on, I got this. Let me cook

@rae

Cool art!! I like the long tipped ears. And your traditional coloring is good as usual.

Althea sounds like a fantasy name, so it probably doesn’t matter what gender it’s for in real life. As long as it’s not super feminine. I’ve known people to use female names for male characters and I don’t usually care.

@loppylin

that is literally what they’re here for actually hehe

He anticipates unhelpfulness from everyone he meets lol.

Acharis

Acharis stared at the image projected in the basin. The land continued for miles in every direction with no end in sight, and it was filled with pointless corridors of stone and shrub, mostly leading to nowhere. The…[Read more]

@theshadow

Huntress

“Step away from Rosalind.” Azalea drew a pistol. I did the same.

“Finally, they’ve found you. Half of them, at least……Thank you both for coming. It was getting a little dull.” The man, or at least I thought it looked like a man, drew a sword. It flashed silver in the dim light.

I quickly camouflaged. My gun and my clo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I wore that face today for five minutes straight because I figured something out and I’m so pleased with it, hehe

@rae

I read that last sentence and I regret all my choices to emotionally torture this poor fellow

Lucille

Lucy looked at the fist mark once more and let out a shuddery sigh. She let go of her sleeves, which she had been fidgeting with, and bolted forward.

As Gabriel’s hands lowered from tying the ribbon, she reached him and wrapped her arms a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Soldier is just along for the ride. XD I’m sure this situation is rather confusing out of context. He’s like, huh? Okay, this is happening.

@loopylin

Dear, adventurous Mel needs her beauty sleep

@whalekeeper @loopylin @rae

Soldier

This was all very confusing.

So he was a demon? Then he wasn’t? Then he WAS again??

He didn’t look like one (not that I know what they look like. But it’s not that). He looked like a Changeling, a little bit, but he wasn’t THAT either!

Gabriel didn’t take the words nicely. I wouldn’t either.

Hunt…[Read more]

I realize Lucy is being confusing. Hopefully it’ll make sense in a bit

@rae @keilah-h @loopylin

Why did this take me so long. This is like, the shortest thing ever

Lucille

Lucy had been standing still, and now she rocked back and forth slightly. “That’s… That’s what you were like.”

She looked from Gabriel to the fist mark in the wall again.

She smiled. Faintly, at first. Everything blurred and she found, by…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I’ll try the link!