Abigail.M.

(Tw- (this is probably my favorite show don’t tell, but my most gruesome chapter) shows a physical attack (beating her up) and cruel words. BUT DON”T WORRY it’ll all be better soon.)

Chapter 4

X392

 

I sat there for a long time, gritting my teeth, and trying to not scream my lungs out as I laid in the grass. My cut felt like there were hot…[Read more]

(Tw- None)

Chapter 3

Nathaniel

 

I started sweeping the front porch of the store, using hard big strokes to try to get the layer of dusty dirt off of it quickly.

I was about halfway done when I saw a woman and girl walking up the pathway. I stopped, to let the dust settle so it wouldn’t get in their eyes.

The woman was tall, and nice…[Read more]

(TW- mentions murder. Aka my Morally grey character’s past that makes him now morally grey 🙁

Chapter 2

Roger

 

After staring at the ceiling for a long time, I finally got up. There’s no way I could get to sleep. Not on a night like this… not this one. I got up and walked towards the window, the full moon sending light through it, but sto…[Read more]

 

 

I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.

I thought he had changed.

I thought he cared.

He did it.

The thing I never thought he would do.

I felt like I was in a haze.

The noise of chains met my ears.

He said he understood.

He helped me.

How could he?

I staggered and gripped the bars harder.

He said he…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Lol, to be fair he emailed it instead of saying it on here XD. But he also gave me an essay of eveything wrong with it. BUT i’m not against critique, i’m definitely for it. But when your critique is against even proper writing… (like he thinks i should info dump at the beginning and not start in the middle of the scene???…[Read more]

@orielle21 Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂

 

@freedomwriter76 Thankkkksss ^-^ I’ll tag you when i do soon!

 

@gwyndalf-the-wise That’s totally okay, whatever is chill. Chapter 4 is the one that makes the sensitive ones a little uncomfortable (very detailed of X392 being beat up) but on the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 sooo does anyone wanna RP in our group or who’s turn is it?

@freedomwriter76 aww poor boys….

Arabella

“Yes, I do…” Ara smiled fondly at the thought of her family, though it faltered slightly.

Were they doing well? Back in A’Grend…?

Was her home…still the same? Or was everything different now?

It felt like only yesterday when she’d left in order to protect it…yet…at the same time it felt like centuries…[Read more]

@orielle21

 

 

amazing!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

until I got to the end and I legit said-

 

 

 

WHAT….

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

because I totally shipped James and Maria….. 😭

@loopylin ur good!!! Don’t stress!!

@godlyfantasy12

That’s totally fine, no worries! Thank you so much for the help and explaining 🙂

@gold-hummingbird THAT SOUNDS AMAZING!!!

 

I watched a few Dream SMP animatics and loved them but I can’t/won’t watch anymore due to language and just…yea…

And I also can’t read fanfic because it’s obviously not kosher

 

SO UR WIP SOUNDS AMAZING!!! (Wait so is it still fanfic or u making it ur own WIP?)

 

Ppl do that all the time @katthewriter! They make one forum (like this one you’ve already made even, or u can make a new one) and add their chapters/scenes to it as they write.

I will say…I might not be able to read the WIP just due to current sensitivity and trying to be a bit cautious of what I read, and Ik that might sound crazy con…[Read more]

@loopylin cool! My only issue with community charries is they’re kinda difficult to write…I was kinda curious as to what Charrie @princesachronicle22 was gonna add…

I mean.. If I could add chapter by Chapter section to put my book on here, I would. But i’m not sure if that’ll count as spam even if I just keep it in one of these whatever they’re called. Posts. Or has anyone else done that? Like updated it as they go?

also… I love how grammatically correct these boxes all bc all of why i’m typing it’s like going
“Ahem? Hello, but you are terrible at grammar.” Like yes. Ik. Thank you. XD I can write well if it’s in a book. Kinda. But just typing like this I write like texting.

Stop personally attacking me Kingdom Pen xD

@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.

And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.

Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.

But thank you!!

And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]