AveryTheExplodey

@freedomwriter76 @rae @acancello @grcr @esther-c

I made another board for Ottoline!!!

PICS AREN’T WORKING?!?!?

UGH! here’s the link then…haha

https://www.canva.com/design/DAF4zCOFMIg/YNG5g7pu5wicqmAQviObEw/edit?utm_content=DAF4zCOFMIg&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@freedomwriter76

Thank you <3

@freedomwriter76

Now you know how I feel when I read your stuff…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

but this might be worse…

@freedomwriter76

The protection squad…

this made me laugh XD

though you might need to call in the squad lol

@esther-c

Livia

“I’ve never heard of Alethia,” she mused. “But I suppose you haven’t heard of Andromeda either, so we’re even.”  she paused. “Wait, did you just say you’re being chased by the government?” she raised an eyebrow.

@esther-c

haha! I think that’s the saddest thing I’ve EVER written!!!

@freedomwriter76

Ofc! (:

I posted something…um…sad…in the “A place to share whatever we’re working on” if you want to read something as equally sad as what you posted, lol

Esther can vouch for the fact that it is sad…

@esther-c

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our schedule’s back to normal after Christmas break and all that. 🙃

Okay!! It doesn’t really matter to me XD It’s up to you!

@scoutfinch180

Yeah, Marcurious is an…interesting character XD

@esther-c

KP Con anyone…? 👀

YES YES YES!!!! xD

@rae

Oh no!!! I’ll be praying!!! <333

I am actually concerned for my mental health now…LIKE WHAT 14 YEAR OLD GIRL WRITES THAT?!?!?

@esther-c

Girl whyyy?? 😭

Um….

Sorry…

XD

Don’t say I didn’t warn you! lol

@rae

I could add Rylee! She’s a character from another WIP that is going nowhere XD (how old is Junior again? 18, right?)

@esther-c

Liv

“Yeah, I do,” she pursed her lips. “It’s just me, my mani and pani,” she smiled. “And Xandro. I consider him family, too.  Where are you from?”

@jonas

Oops! I didn’t even notice that XD I will fix that!!

@grcr

Marcurious is between 16 and 18. I haven’t really figured that out yet haha!

@scoutfinch180

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

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@jonas

I guess it would probably make the most sense to have all the powers be something similar, where the user redistributes a property of their body to other parts. That could be pretty cool, I guess. I could do this as sort of Feruchemy, but you just redistribute attributes across your body instead of storing them away (where you lose some of…

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@jonas

Yeah, that’s pretty much what I’ve been thinking. I’m definitely going to keep working on this one.

Sounds good!

That is what I was trying to say too. I guess I was being too concise to properly get across what I was trying to say. The reason I don’t like that is because light and darkness are both real, while voidflames are not. I would p…

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@jonas

Really? Huh. I didn’t know that. I feel like I’ve been aware of those terms for a super long time, but I didn’t read any of his books until last summer.

Oh, yeah lol! It came from him!

@a-r-kuhn @jonas

(KP just ate my post, so it may or may not randomly pop up in the following few days)

It’s too true! Unfortunately I end up nodding too much if I’m reading anytime past one. I can stay up for other things, but I can’t be sitting down. Sanderson is worth it though!