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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Fantasy Universe: Celestiar in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
i like your idea for your universe and books on each of the planets. I had an idea for that once, but it kind of fell apart. Good luck with yours!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
oh yeah I remember reading that, I just didn’t put two and two together haha! Like you said, I just took it as that’s how long she lived there, not how old she was.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
It’s really good! I like it! One question:How old is Libbie? Or does it say, sorry if I missed it, I kind of skimmed it.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I love the name Lilitu as well! Another one of my favorites in my story is Sef, and I absolutely love Ottoline’s name!!! And Marcurious. I guess I might be a little biased, haha!
But thank you! I’ll pass on the message to Lilitu…haha! Right now he and Sef are running through the woods to evade the Pythonos. He’s a little busy, but…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent. So it’s totally fine if lots of people recognize them! I guess it doesn’t matter, however I want to make the Bible/Bible stories interesting and exciting for those who…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
wait sorry I just realized there’s like 417 pages never mind! so i’m guessing that’s a no.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Is there room for one more?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I hope you like it! It can get a little graphic in violence at times, but it’s nothing too bad and it’s really well written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @acancello @jonas @hybridlore
Guys don’t you find it weird that there’s 907 members on KP (it says at the bottom of the screen when you click on “community”) and there’s only a few that are on here a lot? WHERE ARE ALL THE OTHERS? haha! I’m kind of hyper, I had a double shot espresso right before my volleyball game…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
Yeah, as you said Whale, it definitely works, I’m just trying to figure out what the actual structure is in relation to reality, as real places such as earth are mentioned. Your answers Sara are still throwing me off because “I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
You are so lucky to have a mom who you can go to for advice on writing! I love my mom and she’s basically my best friend, but when it comes to writing, I’m on my own. She doesn’t like the kind of writing I write because she gets really sad and depressed when the scenes are sad. Same with my dad.
I had to teach myself how to write up until…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 7 months ago
@lydia-s if you want to read more I’ll tag you when i post this chapter!
Thanks! It’s one of my favorites!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And of course don’t feel bad if you don’t have time to read it, I get it, and glad you’re working on your WIP so much! And great work, 54 pages is a lot! I remember how happy I was when I hit 50 pages 🙂 Idk how many pages mine is since I’m using a platform called Reedsy and it doesn’t have pages (kind of weird, i know), but I have…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
no worries! I’m busy too, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Yay!!! Thank you!!! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨'s profile was updated 2 years, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂
I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
What’s your guys’ favorite Christian music artists? My favorites are Colton Dixon, Jeremy Camp, Tasha Layton, Dan Bremnes, and For King and Country!
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Oooh that’s tough, I like Toby Mac, occasionally Britt Nicole and of course For King and Country!
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Also Rend Collective! 🙂
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Sammmme, I also like Britt Nicole! And Rend Collective’s good too!
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Oh yeah, and TobyMac.
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My hands were shaking so bad!
Yeah. I’m guessing there are people who joined and basically just “left” but didn’t delete their accounts.
@jonas
yeah it’s kind of sad 🙁 I love KP
A lot of people joined a long time ago and are adults now, so don’t really have time for KP I guess. Other ppl join and then NEVER come on. But 907 does seem pretty high.
Also there’s an age limit, so once you turn 25 or something like that, you can’t use it anymore. I’m not sure if your account is deleted after that, but yeah, basically what @highscribeofaetherium said.
lol, yeah… I think about that often…. 🙃 Cloaked Mystery is probably right.
By the way, if at all possible, do not drink double shot espresso before a game. (totally not speaking from experience)
lol
I saw this post called “character castle” and I really think it’d be fun, but there’s already too many characters, so should I make another one, and if I did would you guys join?
If you don’t know what a character castle is, there’s one in the section “general writing discussions” I believe.
Oh, sorry this is late! If you make another, I would definitely join!
okay! I’ll tag you when I do!
Yeah, like Highscribe said, they might be adults and not have time, or just super busy people 🙂
I think there is a Character castle 2.0, but its not as popular as #1, I think @freedomwriter76 and @whalekeeper and @godlyfantasy12 know most about it 😀
@acancello
I was also thinking…what if I made a “character castle” without a castle, in a different place, like “character treehouse” (okay that sounds lame, but you know what I mean) or “character birthday party” or something like that?