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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Request for initiation granted. Please look at this photograph. *Forgets everything upon seeing the image
Welcome aboard Agent Whaley, you may be briefed on your future tasks above. After which, permission to depart on mission is granted.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Is this what you meant?
Well done initiate. You have successfully catalogued a new Anomaly.
(It would be cool if we could do both new ideas and ideas from our own WIPs. I also wonder if it would be cool to turn into an RP where our different charries find the AT-C, and have to encounter the different Anomalies.)
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
File-477 of Catalogue 221: Anomaly-6099
Name: Frendid’s Walk
Origin: unknown
Direct sightings: 27 to ∞
Signature sightings: 1
Description: Frendid to us was once a senior agent of the AT-C. Supposedly in another world, he was known as Dr. Vrendit, and agent of the ZT-X. In another, He was Mr. Didnerf the barber. Unfortunately, all such F…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Ah, I see some recent initiates need to be re-briefed. Your task is to find and catalogue any Anomalies you encounter (come up with/dream up). Agent Arcane has recently catalogued The Painter in our Archive. Follow his example. List any paranormal behavior you’ve noticed in the anomaly, we cannot miss anything.
Good luck.
–AT-C a…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Ok, that makes more sense. I was gonna ask, what frame of reference does it stop in motion, so the infinite inertia idea does kinda help. I’ll still have to ponder on how that works on the temporal aspect though.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Interesting! I love the high contrast magic systems. Giving me Star Wars vibes actually with the light side and dark side users, and grey Jedi. Question on the positive temporal pulse. What does it mean for the object to be frozen in time, and therefore unmovable?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
File-476 of Catalogue 221: Anomaly-6097
Name: [The Painter]
Origin: unknown
Direct sightings: none
Signature sightings: 9
Description: The Painter has never been seen directly, but signs of its work have been documented. Walls have been found painted unevenly in colors described by witnesses as “…the colors of everything…” and “…an…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom started the topic The AT-C (top secret) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Welcome initiate.
You will now be briefed on your task as an employee of the AT-C (Anomaly Tracking and Cataloguing).
Your purpose here is to find an anomaly*, track it, and catalogue your findings in this archive you have just received clearance to.
*Anomaly- Any entity that presents paranormal behavior.
Any Anomaly you find will likely b…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Yes, exactly. You cant make 100% of the people happy 100% of the time. The moon was launched around 20 years before the book takes place so the riots and mobs of angry protesters have calmed down. Also, before electricity prices were skyrocketing due to the amount they were using with all of the new technology (Most everything switched…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
I’m probably not going to be the best at giving advice on color and character. Color I feel is arbitrary unless there’s something special about it, like the combination of the two metrics in some way. Character we’ve discussed in the past in many ways. I’m not really sure what advice I could give that you don’t already know.
As for the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
I haven’t read it yet, but I’ll probably get to it sometime today!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Let’s gooooo!!!!! Congratulations!!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Hey Sara, is that your story that KP just posted?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Well, my main idea was to have it look as ‘natural’ as possible so that the citizens would be more open to the idea and allow it to happen while not realize the dangers that it has the potential of causing.
I feel like they would need to do a little more convincing to make the populace complacent. There will always be resistance, and…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Ok, so here’s the thing. This looks like a combination of a Dyson sphere and a space elevator. The issue you deal with is that a “moon” would be a very impractical shape for collecting energy, unless it isn’t actually spherical, or it wasn’t connected by some cable to the earth. So is it spherical, or is it more of…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 1 week ago
Welcome to KP!
I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.
Questions:
Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
What’s CWW?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
Okay, cool! Thanks!
Any time!
Those number systems hurt my brain! 😵💫 I think I’ll stick with simple base-something systems!
Alright, fine😅
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
I’d have to look back over all my words so far, but I know that the name ‘Thulac” has it unvoiced. I’m guessing it varies depending on the word, like in English.
Ok cool!
Okay, that makes sense. Do you have any tips on what words I should create? So far, I’ve pretty much just been creating words as I’ve needed them, but do you have another…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
Somehow I completely missed your progress on your conlang on here. December was really crazy for me, so I guess it makes sense, sorry😅
So you’ve already got a lot of words down, so that’s really cool! Quick question, how is ‘Th’ meant to be pronounced? Is it voiced, like ‘that’ or unvoiced, like ‘math’?
So you’ve followed English’s rules…[Read more]
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