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@jonas

So I have a few questions about this. Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French. This is fine, just thought I’d mention it. If you want to pay a little more attention to the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]

@esther-c

Congratulations! I wasn’t able to do it really. I was able to do that short story, and work a little on my current Novel though, just not quite 50,000 words, lol!

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @jonas

Lol! Do I win by forfeit, or is there anyone else that was working on this?

Ok, I went ahead and did it. I don’t know if anyone else did. Regardless, I’m sorry Rae, but you left too obvious of a exploitation in the prompt, and I had to take advantage, and it came out in a high degree of jest.

This is experimental for me, and I promise I wasn’t on anything XD!

My Entery: The “Inner” Struggle

I clutched death in a hand…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I do everything using Google drive, including docs. If it get’s too laggy, I just start a new doc.

@jonas

…voting on the monarch’s decisions. The monarch then dictates his decisions regarding the outcome of the vote. This proceeds infinitely until…

the monarch sacrifices themselves while doing a backflip, while hola hooping  into the inactive volcano of Diffi. The voters must then…

The Diffi Cult is ruled in the most difficult manner possible, by…

being a democracy and monarchy at the same time. They accomplish this by…

@jonas

…lazy. They are then…

Shunned in the most difficult way possible, meaning…

@jonas

Any member of the Diffi Cult found guilty of taking the easier and/or more straightforward path is subjected to…

picking up a ball, and putting it back down. The task is so easy that…

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Introducing the Diffi Cult! The Cult of Diffi worships the god Diffi, who teaches that absolutely everything one does should be as difficult to do as possible. The god Diffi makes everything so hard for itself that it’s…

@jonas

Yeah, that could be interesting. The perception thing I still think if given to the right person with the right mental discipline, they could do a lot if there isn’t so much of a specific form of “power” you receive. Perhaps it could always be intellectual power, or influential power, ect. If that were the case though, if you could give up…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I’ve noticed this as well.

@jonas

Fair enough. I feel like there could be logical loopholes still to get around that. Like in the case of getting a robotic arm to replace an existing arm, what if you control your perception enough, to say “I give my “flesh arm” for a “metal appendage with these qualities” or something like that. As long as you can convince yourself that it…[Read more]

@jonas

Cool! Trade off magic systems are always really fun, because they have good narrative effects. Someone that just wants power may have trouble getting a lot of it, because they care about it more than what they have to sacrifice. Someone that does have things they care about enough, they don’t want to sacrifice that. So no one is going to…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, and Lost Metal is supposed to be big in exploring aspects of the Cosmere as well. At least a bunch of things from other books will apear.

@jonas

Unity is not the confirmed one, but you’ll find out which one is if you read Stormlight 3.5.

Really, interesting. That’s the one my sister is reading next I believe, while I start Elantris, then we’ll swap.

@jonas

So the weird thing is, Brandon Sanderson confirmed that Renarin is the first person to bond a corrupt spren. It seems to be implied that his future sight is only because of the corruption, and not a normal Truthwatcher ability. But then what is going on with this ancient Truthwatcher? If he isn’t corrupted, then is future sight a normal Tru…

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@jonas

In one of the cabinets in Urithiru, a gemstone message from an ancient Truthwatcher says “I foresaw this.” That’s not the whole thing, but it’s the important part.

That is a very important point. It makes sense that seeing the future isn’t necessarily a corrupt quality, as that’s a shared ability of all the shards as far as I know. Yet the…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, the way that it jumped between perspectives worked really well. A movie version of this scene would just be incredible!

I know! The amount of purely cinematic moments throughout the series is incredible, but this would be an epic avengers style climax in theaters, only better.

What do you think about what’s happening with Renarin? Th…

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