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April 18, 2018 at 9:46 am #71089
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet. Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. I will be on as often as I can!
"In a mask, was he?"
April 18, 2018 at 12:13 pm #71092@ariel-ashira @jenwriter17 @alia @skredder I’m on here early today. Is anyone available to join me in writing?
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April 18, 2018 at 12:37 pm #71094@rochellaine I think I can be on for a while 🙂 Working on your western?
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www.jennaterese.comApril 18, 2018 at 12:39 pm #71095@jenwriter17 “Course of,” as my little sister used to say. 😉
What about you? That robot girl?
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April 18, 2018 at 12:44 pm #71096@rochellaine haha “course of” that’s cute! 😉
Yup, my dystopian. 🙂
you wanna share snippets of our WIPs? it’s okay if you don’t want to.
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www.jennaterese.comApril 18, 2018 at 12:55 pm #71098@jenwriter17 Okay, but I’m not sure exactly what you mean. 😀 Do you mean one or two sentence sections like SeekJustice did in her last post on An Ordinary Pen?
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April 18, 2018 at 1:02 pm #71099@rochellaine We can do anything between a couple sentences to a paragraph if you want. 🙂
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www.jennaterese.comApril 18, 2018 at 1:06 pm #71100@jenwriter17 Okay. Your idea, you first. 😛
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April 18, 2018 at 1:11 pm #71101@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys! I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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April 18, 2018 at 1:12 pm #71102@rochellaine Okay, here’s one:
That laugh. It shook Rin’s core and made her shudder. Her ears tingled and her eyes squeezed shut.
Enough.
Rin flung an arm out. Her fist hit Takara full on the cheek.
Takara stumbled back and the soldiers grabbed Rin’s arms. Takara steadied herself and gingerly felt her face. It was already red. “How dare you! You’ll regret this, girl. Oh, trust me, you will.” She stormed out of the cell. The soldiers threw Rin back and she hit the wall. Her spine bruised again the hard surface. The soldiers left and locked the cell.
Rin took a few deep breaths, replaying Takara’s stunned reaction in her mind. God forgive me, I enjoyed that.
That was a little longer than expected, so feel free to post a snippet as long as you want 😉
just curious; do you like vintage clothing?
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www.jennaterese.comApril 18, 2018 at 1:13 pm #71103@ariel-ashira Welcome! we’re sharing WIP snippets if you want to too. 🙂
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www.jennaterese.comApril 18, 2018 at 1:22 pm #71104@jenwriter17 Well, you’ve already read most of what I’ve written so far, so here’s what I came up with…
“How do you feel, Chara?” the nurse asked, coming up to Chara’s bed and smiling at her.
“I want to get up,” Chara answered, lifting the corner of her mouth in an attempt to smile back. Immediately her cheek hurt, and she remembered the burns she had received there. I guess smiling’s out of the question? That’s kind of annoying.
Yes I do! How did you guess? 😉
@ariel-ashira Hello!"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 18, 2018 at 1:23 pm #71105@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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April 18, 2018 at 1:24 pm #71106@rochellaine Nice! Does Chara go to the hospital???
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April 18, 2018 at 1:26 pm #71107@rochellaine I was just looking at a website modcloth.com, and I though “hmm, maybe Rochellaine likes vintage clothing.” Here’s the link if you wanna check it out (not all the clothing is modest, but there are some cute things 🙂 ): https://www.modcloth.com/
i like the snippet 🙂 poor girl….
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