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    The Most Esteemed Feathered One
    @theducktator
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      @loopylin

      When in doubt, blow something up, preferably something important. XD

      If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.

      #192347
      Whalekeeper
      @loopylin
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        @theducktator That’s some good advice right there

        🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻

        #192348
        Loopylin
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          @loopylin

          Hehe, I actually have ideas. That’s not normal.

          I think it would be cool, during at least some of these mini-adventures, to focus on Lois and Fel because they start off having very different personalities and backgrounds. They kind of have to figure each other out…?

          Here are some ideas:

          – Every time I picture your story world, I imagine a huge gothic chapel. DON’T ASK ME WHY, I HAVE NO IDEA WHY. Maybe within the steampunk setting, there are some old-fashioned buildings left.

          It might be cool if Lois really wants to draw some of the stained-glass art inside, but the place is locked up. He just decides to theorize about what’s inside. But Fel does her impulsive thing and decides help him scale the chapel wall, climbing gargoyles and spires.

          – Fel can be tasked with babysitting Brea and loses her in the city. Fel can get familiar with the city super fast this way. You can play with the fact that she’s a foreigner.

          – – Some of the older machines freeze up in the cold, and they have to fix one for a friend…? Or use the pieces for something creative? I don’t know what you would use this for, but it feel like it could be a piece of an adventure.

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          #192349
          Loopylin
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            Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.

            #ProtectAdolinKholin

            #192350
            Loopylin
            @whalekeeper
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              – Ooh, what about robot catacombs? Like instead of the dead burial tunnels, have robot ‘burial’ catacombs underneath the city that can also function as an archive.

              #ProtectAdolinKholin

              #192351
              Loopylin
              @whalekeeper
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                Please give me a moment while I geek out over the potential of the ink magic system

                #ProtectAdolinKholin

                #192354
                Whalekeeper
                @loopylin
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                  @whalekeeper

                  I love all of these ideas thank you!

                  Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.

                  No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.

                  🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻

                  #192355
                  Whalekeeper
                  @loopylin
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                    Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology

                    🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻

                    #192364
                    Loopylin
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                      @loopylin

                      Glad to help! I’m so glad there’s gothic architecture (:

                      #ProtectAdolinKholin

                      #192426
                      TheShadow
                      @theshadow
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                        @whalekeeper

                        What’s this topic for?

                        "No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"

                        #192525
                        Loopylin
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                          @theshadow

                          I think this topic was essentially the Chat Chat before the Chat Chat existed. Before KP temporarily shut down several years ago, that is. They made this as a replacement for the lost topic, and here it is now.

                          #ProtectAdolinKholin

                          #192682
                          MineralizedWritings
                          @mineralizedwritings
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                            @loopylin

                            oof I don’t know those characters that well, but here’s some random ideas:

                            Dumpster diving even though it might be illegal?

                            Somebody tries to film a vlog only to realize their life isn’t that interesting

                            Sending my characters shopping is my literal favorite because everyone shops differently. (Tauren is super stingy and loves sales, even if the items on sale aren’t what he came to buy). Like some characters just get super ecstatic while other are just checking price tags and grumbling the whole time.

                            Shopping for clothes for a event sounds like a fun scene too, I have one like that and it’s one of my favs.

                            if it’s winter they should definitely make some dirty snow angles on some snow covered pavement

                            Ooh climbing onto a roof to get a better view of a astronomical phenomenon– whatever occurs on or around this planet, maybe its a comet that comes every few years or so. Then you get to describe the city view from the roof too.

                            That’s all I got for now lol

                             

                             

                             

                            "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                            #192684
                            TheShadow
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                              @whalekeeper

                              Ah, ok. Thanks.

                              "No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"

                              #192689
                              Whalekeeper
                              @loopylin
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                                @mineralizedwritings

                                Thanks for the ideas! Also, the fact that Tauren shops like an old man is hilarious to me XD

                                🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻

                                #192773
                                Loopylin
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                                  @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

                                  The way a person shops actually tells you so much about them

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