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December 18, 2024 at 11:43 pm #192346
When in doubt, blow something up, preferably something important. XD
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Devote reddamus!December 18, 2024 at 11:52 pm #192347@theducktator That’s some good advice right there
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December 19, 2024 at 12:23 am #192348Hehe, I actually have ideas. That’s not normal.
I think it would be cool, during at least some of these mini-adventures, to focus on Lois and Fel because they start off having very different personalities and backgrounds. They kind of have to figure each other out…?
Here are some ideas:
– Every time I picture your story world, I imagine a huge gothic chapel. DON’T ASK ME WHY, I HAVE NO IDEA WHY. Maybe within the steampunk setting, there are some old-fashioned buildings left.
It might be cool if Lois really wants to draw some of the stained-glass art inside, but the place is locked up. He just decides to theorize about what’s inside. But Fel does her impulsive thing and decides help him scale the chapel wall, climbing gargoyles and spires.
– Fel can be tasked with babysitting Brea and loses her in the city. Fel can get familiar with the city super fast this way. You can play with the fact that she’s a foreigner.
– – Some of the older machines freeze up in the cold, and they have to fix one for a friend…? Or use the pieces for something creative? I don’t know what you would use this for, but it feel like it could be a piece of an adventure.
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December 19, 2024 at 12:25 am #192349Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.
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December 19, 2024 at 12:27 am #192350– Ooh, what about robot catacombs? Like instead of the dead burial tunnels, have robot ‘burial’ catacombs underneath the city that can also function as an archive.
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December 19, 2024 at 12:31 am #192351Please give me a moment while I geek out over the potential of the ink magic system
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December 19, 2024 at 12:51 am #192354I love all of these ideas thank you!
Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.
No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.
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December 19, 2024 at 12:53 am #192355Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology
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December 19, 2024 at 10:18 am #192364December 19, 2024 at 6:32 pm #192426December 20, 2024 at 10:18 pm #192525I think this topic was essentially the Chat Chat before the Chat Chat existed. Before KP temporarily shut down several years ago, that is. They made this as a replacement for the lost topic, and here it is now.
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