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October 8, 2023 at 11:07 pm #158533
(Jake) chases Fabian
establishing shot to indicate that they’re headed toward the silos thus Jake is now closer to the ocean instead of Fabian.
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:07 pm #158534We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:08 pm #158535(Jake) *draws pistol* *aims* *fires*
*bullet ricochetes off helmet and glances off Jake’s helmet, knocking him down.*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:09 pm #158536We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:09 pm #158537(Fabian) *feeels crack in helmet*
*approaches Jake cautiously*
“a-are you ok?”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:10 pm #158538We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:10 pm #158539(Jake) *straightens and aims gun at Fabian, mouth and some scars exposed*
(Fabian) *shocked and scared, lifts blaster and says, “I dont’ want to hurt you… please stop.”
pannel that’s zoomed out, Jake standing on the edge of the ocean
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:11 pm #158540We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:11 pm #158541(fabian) “Maybe we can help each other?”
(Jake) *steps backward and boot cracks edge* *hand shaking* “You’re really stupid for a… whatever you are”
Pannel with Fabian’s hurt face.
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October 8, 2023 at 11:12 pm #158542We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:12 pm #158543(Fabian) *sighs* “Sorry about this.” *yeets gun.*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:13 pm #158544We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:13 pm #158545*hits Jake in stomach, knocking him back into water”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:14 pm #158546We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 11:14 pm #158547Jake starts sinking, panic setting in with the red. he’s thrashing in the water
any tips for showing how he’s struggling to swim?
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