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    Scoutillus Finch
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      We crazy people are the normal ones.

      #158486
      Scoutillus Finch
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        (Paris) “Is it behind some mountains?”

        (Jake) “Yep.”

        “Did you pack me anything for climbing?”

        We crazy people are the normal ones.

        #158487
        Scoutillus Finch
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          We crazy people are the normal ones.

          #158488
          Scoutillus Finch
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            (Ok to preface the previous and the next 2 pages (7&8) they’re both different versions of the same part, but I accidentally put them both in. I was thinking of keeping both somehow as a way to help indicate the travel of Jake)

            We crazy people are the normal ones.

            #158490
            Scoutillus Finch
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              (Paris) “Why’d i need to do that? the gravitys low and I spent more than you’re worth on those bionics.”

              (Jake) “point taken.”

              (Jake, irritated) “Better be prepared to spend more money if i fall.”

              We crazy people are the normal ones.

              #158491
              Scoutillus Finch
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                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                #158492
                Scoutillus Finch
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                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

                  #158493
                  Scoutillus Finch
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                    (Paris) “regardless, you’d better not fail.”

                    “I don’t want a repeat of fabian.”

                    We crazy people are the normal ones.

                    #158494
                    Scoutillus Finch
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                      We crazy people are the normal ones.

                      #158495
                      Scoutillus Finch
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                        Jake misses the ledge being reminded of this person and catches himself, showing that this is a touchy issue for him.

                        We crazy people are the normal ones.

                        #158496
                        Scoutillus Finch
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                          We crazy people are the normal ones.

                          #158497
                          Scoutillus Finch
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                            (Jake, very angry) “Don’t bring him into this.”

                            We crazy people are the normal ones.

                            #158498
                            Scoutillus Finch
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                              We crazy people are the normal ones.

                              #158499
                              Scoutillus Finch
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                                (Paris) “Well, it’s kinda hard not to… given it’s y…”

                                (Jake) “SHUT UP!”

                                (Paris, deadpan) “You want to argue?”

                                (Jake)

                                *sighs*

                                “Nevermind”

                                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                                #158500
                                Scoutillus Finch
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                                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

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