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    Scoutillus Finch
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      We crazy people are the normal ones.

      #158518
      Scoutillus Finch
      @scoutfinch180
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        (Jake)

        *sees Fabain looking over ocean.*

        *show his hands shaking as he aims.*

        *he inhales*

        *he readies blaster*

        *blaster quietly whines as it fires up*

        We crazy people are the normal ones.

        #158519
        Scoutillus Finch
        @scoutfinch180
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          We crazy people are the normal ones.

          #158520
          Scoutillus Finch
          @scoutfinch180
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            (Fabian) *hears whine, indicated by an ear twitch*

            (Jake) *exhales and pulls trigger*

            (Fabian) *As blaster loudly fires, Fabian dodges and turns, tripping.*

            We crazy people are the normal ones.

            #158521
            Scoutillus Finch
            @scoutfinch180
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              We crazy people are the normal ones.

              #158522
              Scoutillus Finch
              @scoutfinch180
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                (Fabian) *falls on his knees, staring at Jake*

                (Jake) *aims agian*

                (Fabian) *Holds up hand*

                “S-stop…”

                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                #158523
                Scoutillus Finch
                @scoutfinch180
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                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

                  #158524
                  Scoutillus Finch
                  @scoutfinch180
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                    (Jake) *Lowers blaster, confused*

                    (fabian, looking scared,) “Please.

                    We crazy people are the normal ones.

                    #158525
                    Scoutillus Finch
                    @scoutfinch180
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                      We crazy people are the normal ones.

                      #158526
                      Scoutillus Finch
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                        (Jake) “Sorry,”

                        “I’m not gonna fall for that.”

                        *Show Fabian’s scared face in the helmet’s reflection.*

                        We crazy people are the normal ones.

                        #158527
                        Scoutillus Finch
                        @scoutfinch180
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                          We crazy people are the normal ones.

                          #158528
                          Scoutillus Finch
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                            (Fabian) *knocks Jake’s legs out from under him with his tail*

                            (Jake) *drops gun and falls on back*

                            We crazy people are the normal ones.

                            #158529
                            Scoutillus Finch
                            @scoutfinch180
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                              We crazy people are the normal ones.

                              #158530
                              Scoutillus Finch
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                                (Fabian) *steals gun*

                                (Jake) *surprised*

                                (Fabian) “Um… Sorry!” and runs away.

                                (Jake) “D—–t!”

                                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                                #158531
                                Scoutillus Finch
                                @scoutfinch180
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                                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

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