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October 8, 2023 at 10:45 pm #158501
Paris) “It’s dissappointing you can’t move on…”
“Given how heartless you were with that girl of yours.”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:47 pm #158502We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:47 pm #158503(Jake,) “She didn’t matter.”
“You should know that about me.”
*Showing panels of Jake’s memories of her, their appearances looking shadowy and vague, his dark, unless in contact with her light figure.*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:48 pm #158504We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:49 pm #158505(Paris) “Good. you should do that with Fabian.”
(Jake, irritated) “I HAVE.”
*Pannel that’s an establishing shot that shows the silos and the ocean*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:50 pm #158507We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:50 pm #158508(Paris) “Are you sure?”
(Jake)
*showing past memories of Fabian*
Fabian when born
Fabian fixing something
teaching Jake math
callign out for help
asking if Jake’s ok.
saying he missed him.
news of fabian’s death on sci-fi television.
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:51 pm #158509We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:51 pm #158510(Paris) “It’s your fault he’s dead.”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:52 pm #158511We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:52 pm #158512(Paris) “How many times do i have to tell you to get over it?”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:53 pm #158513We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:54 pm #158514(Paris) “Your only use now is an errand boy, and even then, I’m sure you’ll fall into some water or something and drown yourself by accident.”
(Jake)
*Crawls out of snowdrift*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:55 pm #158515We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:55 pm #158516(Jake)
*hears snow crunchign as something heavy is walking*
*freezes*
(Paris) “what’s that noise?”
(Jake, whispering) “later.”
*turns off ansible*
*louder crunch*
We crazy people are the normal ones.
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