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October 8, 2023 at 10:33 pm #158485
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:34 pm #158486(Paris) “Is it behind some mountains?”
(Jake) “Yep.”
“Did you pack me anything for climbing?”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:37 pm #158487We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:37 pm #158488(Ok to preface the previous and the next 2 pages (7&8) they’re both different versions of the same part, but I accidentally put them both in. I was thinking of keeping both somehow as a way to help indicate the travel of Jake)
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We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:39 pm #158490(Paris) “Why’d i need to do that? the gravitys low and I spent more than you’re worth on those bionics.”
(Jake) “point taken.”
(Jake, irritated) “Better be prepared to spend more money if i fall.”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:39 pm #158491We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:40 pm #158492We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:40 pm #158493(Paris) “regardless, you’d better not fail.”
“I don’t want a repeat of fabian.”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:41 pm #158494We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:42 pm #158495Jake misses the ledge being reminded of this person and catches himself, showing that this is a touchy issue for him.
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:42 pm #158496We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:43 pm #158497(Jake, very angry) “Don’t bring him into this.”
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October 8, 2023 at 10:43 pm #158498We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:44 pm #158499(Paris) “Well, it’s kinda hard not to… given it’s y…”
(Jake) “SHUT UP!”
(Paris, deadpan) “You want to argue?”
(Jake)
*sighs*
“Nevermind”
We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:45 pm #158500We crazy people are the normal ones.
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