Wanna critique my first crack at a comic?

Home Page Forums Other Art Forms Art Wanna critique my first crack at a comic?

Viewing 15 posts - 16 through 30 (of 104 total)
  • Author
    Posts
  • #158470
    Scoutillus Finch
    @scoutfinch180
      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
      • Total Posts: 413

      @mineralizedwritings

      Thank you! I’m so sorry about the link not working, I’ve been trying to trouble-shoot, but this is a big struggle for me lol.

      I totally understand the concern! I prefer not to include cursing in my stories as a whole, but in this case it was what I used in my storyboard as a temporary stand-in for the general feeling and what the character might say. I don’t plan on including a lot of blood and gore in my story (and keeping cursing limited to &@*#$% if at all). This comic isn’t particularly graphic, even though it does have a fight in it. (if there are future installments, there may be a bit of bloodshed (cuts, bruises, bullet wounds maybe), but I plan on keeping anything truly violent or bloody that could prove disturbing to teens and up won’t be focused on, the focus mostly on a character’s reaction than the actual gore, as best as I can.

      I’m aware of the age group/cap, I figured this is also the age group that probably reads a lot of comics too, (there are adults that read them too, like me lol) but thankfully as I’m in my 20’s, I have a few years left :).

      I’m going to see if posting with my phone will solve the problem lol.

      We crazy people are the normal ones.

      #158471
      MineralizedWritings
      @mineralizedwritings
        • Rank: Chosen One
        • Total Posts: 3005

        @scoutfinch180

        Oh it’s totally fine! And I’m not here to tell you what you can and can’t write and draw, I just know SE has a older and probably more tolerant audience than KP does. As long as you’re following the KP guidelines it’s ok! They say that as a general rule of thumb don’t post anything you would not feel comfortable with a 6-year-old viewing. I’m sorry that link isn’t working for you! You should be able to post individual pictures… I know that’s a tedious task though.

        "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

        #158472
        Scoutillus Finch
        @scoutfinch180
          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
          • Total Posts: 413

          I was thinking of going with Exiles as the working series name, Ice as working name for the arc, and calling this first part episode 1

          We crazy people are the normal ones.

          #158473
          Scoutillus Finch
          @scoutfinch180
            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
            • Total Posts: 413

            You’re fine! FINALLY figured something out lol!

            We crazy people are the normal ones.

            #158474
            Scoutillus Finch
            @scoutfinch180
              • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
              • Total Posts: 413

              We crazy people are the normal ones.

              #158475
              Scoutillus Finch
              @scoutfinch180
                • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                • Total Posts: 413

                I liked the idea of opening this with an establishing shot of the moon this story is taking place on, slowly panning to an isolated portal. (there because the portal had no structure built around it yet)

                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                #158476
                Scoutillus Finch
                @scoutfinch180
                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                  • Total Posts: 413

                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

                  #158477
                  Scoutillus Finch
                  @scoutfinch180
                    • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                    • Total Posts: 413

                    I was thinking of merging this page with the one under it and doing a full-body shot of the character coming out of the portal

                    We crazy people are the normal ones.

                    #158478
                    Scoutillus Finch
                    @scoutfinch180
                      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                      • Total Posts: 413

                      We crazy people are the normal ones.

                      #158479
                      Scoutillus Finch
                      @scoutfinch180
                        • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                        • Total Posts: 413

                        We crazy people are the normal ones.

                        #158480
                        Scoutillus Finch
                        @scoutfinch180
                          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                          • Total Posts: 413

                          I want to convey that going through a portal is a bit jarring to go through by having the character stumble through it.

                          We crazy people are the normal ones.

                          #158481
                          Scoutillus Finch
                          @scoutfinch180
                            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                            • Total Posts: 413

                            We crazy people are the normal ones.

                            #158482
                            Scoutillus Finch
                            @scoutfinch180
                              • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                              • Total Posts: 413

                              (Jake) “travel successful.”

                              “ansible working?”

                              (Paris) “positive.”

                              *portal turning off in background*

                              We crazy people are the normal ones.

                              #158483
                              Scoutillus Finch
                              @scoutfinch180
                                • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                                • Total Posts: 413

                                We crazy people are the normal ones.

                                #158484
                                Scoutillus Finch
                                @scoutfinch180
                                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                                  • Total Posts: 413

                                  (Paris) “how’s the nav?”

                                  (Jake) “I’m about to find out.”

                                   

                                  *taps side of helmet*

                                  “I see the target.”

                                  We crazy people are the normal ones.

                                Viewing 15 posts - 16 through 30 (of 104 total)
                                • You must be logged in to reply to this topic.
                                >