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October 8, 2023 at 10:17 pm #158470
Thank you! I’m so sorry about the link not working, I’ve been trying to trouble-shoot, but this is a big struggle for me lol.
I totally understand the concern! I prefer not to include cursing in my stories as a whole, but in this case it was what I used in my storyboard as a temporary stand-in for the general feeling and what the character might say. I don’t plan on including a lot of blood and gore in my story (and keeping cursing limited to &@*#$% if at all). This comic isn’t particularly graphic, even though it does have a fight in it. (if there are future installments, there may be a bit of bloodshed (cuts, bruises, bullet wounds maybe), but I plan on keeping anything truly violent or bloody that could prove disturbing to teens and up won’t be focused on, the focus mostly on a character’s reaction than the actual gore, as best as I can.
I’m aware of the age group/cap, I figured this is also the age group that probably reads a lot of comics too, (there are adults that read them too, like me lol) but thankfully as I’m in my 20’s, I have a few years left :).
I’m going to see if posting with my phone will solve the problem lol.
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October 8, 2023 at 10:23 pm #158471Oh it’s totally fine! And I’m not here to tell you what you can and can’t write and draw, I just know SE has a older and probably more tolerant audience than KP does. As long as you’re following the KP guidelines it’s ok! They say that as a general rule of thumb don’t post anything you would not feel comfortable with a 6-year-old viewing. I’m sorry that link isn’t working for you! You should be able to post individual pictures… I know that’s a tedious task though.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 8, 2023 at 10:24 pm #158472I was thinking of going with Exiles as the working series name, Ice as working name for the arc, and calling this first part episode 1
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October 8, 2023 at 10:25 pm #158473You’re fine! FINALLY figured something out lol!
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October 8, 2023 at 10:26 pm #158474We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:26 pm #158475I liked the idea of opening this with an establishing shot of the moon this story is taking place on, slowly panning to an isolated portal. (there because the portal had no structure built around it yet)
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October 8, 2023 at 10:27 pm #158476We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:28 pm #158477I was thinking of merging this page with the one under it and doing a full-body shot of the character coming out of the portal
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October 8, 2023 at 10:28 pm #158478We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:29 pm #158479We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:29 pm #158480I want to convey that going through a portal is a bit jarring to go through by having the character stumble through it.
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October 8, 2023 at 10:30 pm #158481We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:30 pm #158482(Jake) “travel successful.”
“ansible working?”
(Paris) “positive.”
*portal turning off in background*
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October 8, 2023 at 10:32 pm #158483We crazy people are the normal ones.
October 8, 2023 at 10:32 pm #158484(Paris) “how’s the nav?”
(Jake) “I’m about to find out.”
*taps side of helmet*
“I see the target.”
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