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December 10, 2023 at 5:45 pm #169048
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@smiley Me tooooo đđ
Yes, the poor boiiiii
*GASP*
I love that idea!!! (and it makes me sad, but I digress XD)
hmmm…Pietro and Wanda could have been separated??
Maybe Pietro is found by SHIELD, whereas Wanda is found/taken by the Red Room?
maybe?
idk.
Just throwing ideas out there đ
December 10, 2023 at 5:50 pm #169052@freedomwriter76
Oh my word that’s perfect!!
But the poor boy will be so worried about his sister!!!
So uh well, NOW I HAVE TO WRITE THIS!!
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.â
ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹDecember 10, 2023 at 5:52 pm #169053Anonymous
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@smiley I CAN’T WAITTTTTTT
Oh, and I have Chapter 1 for the fic…đđđ
C H A P T E RÂ 1
âTarget 255 is standing on the north rooftop. Waiting for permission to shoot.â
âPermission has been granted, RomanovaâŠend her.â
Lying on the rough tiles of a roof, raising her gun to her left shoulder, Natalia leveled her weapon and adjusted her sights.
A straight shot.
Easy, practical, efficient.
One shot, and the woman tumbled from the roof.
Thud.
Her still body hit the concrete.
âPerfect work, Romanova, now only one target remains.â
And she would take him out too.
A loud thud from behind.
âCaught you off guard.â
She leapt to her feet.
The man knocked the gun out of her hands.
A knife glinted in the sun.
Natalia grabbed his arm and twisted it.
The man flipped the knife to his other hand.
Natalia kicked his shin; the man groaned.
She grabbed the knife.
The man gripped her forearm and flipped her over his shoulder, throwing her onto the floor with a thud.
He stood above her, knife in hand, ready and poised to end her life.
Was this how everything was going to end?
She had to fight.
She wasnât going to let her final target win.
A loud thud, groan, and gunshot, and the man crumpled onto the roof, dead.
Natalia looked up into the blue eyes, touched by a hint of green, of her partner for the mission.
Captain, and known as nothing else, was fierce, talented, and had a strength unmatched by almost anyone else she knew.
Captain flicked a loose strand of blonde hair behind his ear and dropped a charming smile, another signature of him as a whole. âShould have watched your six.â
âI knew he was behind me. I just didnât know how close.â
âThatâs not like you, Natalia, not at all.â
Natalia brushed her red hair out of her face and gave him a chiding scowl. âJust as itâs unlike you to leave me to take out five targets on my ownâŠDreykov will be disappointed in you.â
Captain grimaced, setting his red and black shield on his back. ââŠHeâll be more than that.â
The only male agent the Red Room held onto, and stronger than the Widows like Natalia, he was invaluable.
Natalia knew of Widows who had simply been eradicated when they didnât accomplish what Dreykov asked, but Captain had committed a few failures, and yet he still lived.
Where Widows would receive the possibly restful release of death for failure, Captain received punishment that often left him sore for daysâŠsometimes even weeks. Natalia had witnessed some of them, and they couldnât be described as anything less than brutal.
But that was how things were doneâŠperhaps how things had to be done.
Their desires were unneeded, unnecessary, and useless to the cause.
And there was no room for failure.
Natalia settled her guns in their holsters and her knives in their sheaths.
She gave Captain a slight nod. âCome on. Dreykov will be waiting.â
âHydra and the Red Room broke ties long ago when you stole the program from us. Itâs time we receive our due reward, DreykovâŠgive us back the Captain.â
âYou handed Captain to us years ago, and you suddenly want him back? Well, Iâm afraid that isnât a possibility, DoctorâŠCaptain will remain here until I have no more need of him.â
Natalia knocked on the hardwood door.
âWho is it!?â
âItâs Agent Romanova, Dreykov, sir, and Captain is also here.â
A few undistinguishable whispers were exchanged.
âCome in!â
Captain opened the door and held it open; Natalia strode into Dreykovâs office. âSir,â she turned to Dreykovâs guest and gave a respective nod, âsirs.â
Dreykov stood and smiled. âRomanova, what a pleasant surprise. How fares my favorite Widow?â
What did it take to be his favorite?
âWell, sir. All of the targets were taken out.â
âPerfect. I hope you worked well together,â he chuckled, âbut who am I kidding? You two must have worked well together once again. AlthoughâŠâ Dreykovâs smile faded into a scowl, âit seems as though Romanova took out most of the targets alone.â
Had it been too much to hope that he wouldnât notice?
âYes, sir, I mostly took out the targets, but Captain saved-â
âMuch use to you? Iâd say it seems as though he is more trouble than anything.â
Dreykovâs eyes blazed, boring into his guest. âI believe that is enough, Doctor Stein. Now leave.â
âThis is a mistake, Dreykov. The Director will make you pay!â The guest yelled. He mumbled undiscernible words beneath his breath and stalked out of the room.
The door slammed closed.
Dreykov turned his attention back to the two Agents. His glare remained, however, but now it bored into Captain. âSubmit your report to Milaina, Romanova, and get to bed so you can be ready for tomorrowâs mission. As for you, Captain,â Dreykovâs eyes blazed, âyou are in dire need of a small bit of discipline.â
Captainâs face paled.
She wanted to help, but she had no other choice than to obey Dreykovâs command.
Natalia turned on her heel, shoving back tears, and stalked out of the room.
This was her life.
And she would be satisfied with it.
December 10, 2023 at 6:06 pm #169056@freedomwriter76
Nat!!!!! And Steve!!! Why would you do this to us???!!!!
Also Drekov is the worst most evil marvel villain out there!! Even Pierce can’t beat him
Although Thanos also took kids and made them into soldiers, like poor Nebula so he does compete a little bit too
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.â
ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹDecember 10, 2023 at 11:33 pm #169109@smiley @freedomwriter76
If ya’re interested, there’s a channel on YouTube, Music Medleys, that compiled a couple soundtrack things from Marvel. He doesn’t have much, though.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (đ)December 11, 2023 at 8:34 am #169121Anonymous
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December 11, 2023 at 8:35 am #169122Anonymous
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I…uhm…I have Chapter 2
(much shorter, but oh well…not all of the chapters can be long XD)
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C H A P T E RÂ 2
âNatalia hasnât responded in hoursâŠsheâs fallen off the face of the earth.â
âThat isnât possible-â
âWell, something has happened, Milaina! Tell everyone to find her, nowâŠshe is the most important mission right now, and I want her alive.â
âYessir.â
Captain strode into Dreykovâs office, following Agent Milainaâs departure.
He stopped in front of Dreykovâs desk, ignoring the aching sensation throughout his entire body, traveling from bruises that reminded him of his failure.
Dreykov paused, looked up, and watched him with a small gleam in his eyes.
Captain stood still and poised. Even if his heart beat what seemed to be a thousand times a minute.
âYou are able to speak.â
Captain didnât move.
Dreykov chuckled. âAh, good to see you paid attention: you must only speak on a specific command. Permission to speak granted, Captain.â
Captain spoke slowly and carefully, his tone edged with a rough tone from a week spent without uttering a single word. ââŠAgent Romanova is missing, sir?â
âHas been for hours, Captain. She wonât respond.â
âDoes she need help-?â
âYou are staying here, Captain, and that is final.â
âSir-â
âDo not make me repeat myselfâŠyou will regret it.â
âIf she-â
âAre you arguing with me, Captain?â Dreykov stood. âBecause if you are, I can have you disciplined once more. You wouldnât want that, would you?â
Captain shuddered.
Discipline, again? A beating and taking his ability to speak without permission from Dreykov werenât enough?
He had been that badâŠhe-he was a failure.
But Natalia was so goodâŠalmostâŠperfect.
âIf Agent Romanova needs help, someone-â
âPermission to speak revoked, Captain. I will have everyone out looking for Romanova, but you will remain here. If you speak one more word on this issue, I will have you disciplined, and disciplined severely, which you would earn and put on yourself.â
Captain gave a slow nod. Terror squeezed his heart.
Dreykov looked up at him and smiled. âAre you afraid?â
âN-â
A harsh slap knocked Captain a step backwards.
âI revoked your permission to speak. You have every reason to fear meâŠI can do anything I want with you. You will remain here, you will obey, and if you do not, you will face my wrath. Do I make myself clear? Nod or shake your head.â
Captain slowly nodded, swallowing the bile that had risen in his throat.
Dreykov rose a sadistic smile.
ââŠGood. Agent Romanova will be foundâŠshe canât escape me forever. Now leave, Captain.â
He quietly strode out of the room.
Natalia had to be safeâŠshe had to be.
And Captain would make sure of it.
December 11, 2023 at 9:54 am #169134@freedomwriter76
Oooooo I really like it!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
December 11, 2023 at 10:09 am #169135@freedomwriter76
*cries*
*cries some more*
I love it though!!
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.â
ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹDecember 11, 2023 at 12:39 pm #169145Anonymous
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@euodia-vision @smiley Thx y’all!! đđ
*quietly offers Miley a bunch of tissues*
December 11, 2023 at 12:45 pm #169148@keilah-h @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 *hands tissues back to you* you might need them since I have Chapter One of my What If? finished
What if Wanda had been sent to the Red Room?
Chapter 1
Ten-year-old Wanda sobbed, deep overwhelming sobs, she had never felt so completely alone. Her parents had died, and she had been separated from her twin brother, with little chance of ever seeing him again. Now she was running through the chaos that was happening.
Other girls her age were being taken into different vehicles. Big strong soldiers with black suits were rounding them up.
One of the soldiers reached for her, but she sprinted away. She needed to get out of here, she needed to run. Yet the back alley where all of this was happening didnât give her that opportunity.
She stumbled onto the concrete road and looked up to see a man. He wasnât wearing armor like the other men, instead, he wore a black trench coat and dress shoes.
He knelt to examine Wanda, her eyes meant his, and she saw darkness and a terrifying emptiness in his eyes. He was middle-aged with a light brown beard with a few white hairs. She immediately stood up, ready to defend herself, yet she knew this man had won.
He framed her face with his hands and in a light whisper he spoke. âRed Room will give you power, it is your home now.â
The sentence was simple yet sent shivers down her spine. She couldnât run, she couldnât talk, she just stood there, feeling nothing but weak.
Before anything else could happen, she felt a needle in her arm and then she went unconscious.
~*~
Wandaâs eyes slowly opened, and for a second she forgot what had happened, but then like dark clouds, her memories came back. It was almost too hard to believe, everything had happened so fast.
She adjusted her position on the bed she had been sleeping on, only to find herself handcuffed to the metal backboard of it. Her breathing got heavier as she realized that there were about thirty beds in the room, but they were all empty.
Where was she?! Was this the Red Room?Â
With a loud creek, the metal door in the corner of the room opened, and two black guards walked in, the same old man with them.
She wanted to run, or hide, but she couldnât move.
âRelease her,â The man instructed.
And with the command, Wanda was released. A purple bruise was on her wrist most likely from the tight handcuffs. She could hardly find the strength to stand, but she did because she was scared of what might happen if she didnât.
The man walked over. âTell me, child, what do you want?â
Hot tears streamed down her face, she knew what she wanted, but not even this man could give it to her. What she wanted was something she could never get back, a feeling she would never feel again. âI want to go home.â
The man smiled, but it wasnât a smile that brought comfort to her, it was a smile that scared her. âThis is your home now,â
He said it as a statement, but it didnât feel true. Where were her parents? Where was the warmth and comfort? How could this be her home?Â
âBut what about Mama and Papa?! Or Pietro?!â Wanda questioned like maybe she could get this man to at least sympathize with her.
But the look on the manâs face was anything but sympathetic. His eyes now showed an intense anger, and before she could move a hard and sharp pain swept across her face as Dreykov hit her.
He then knelt to match her eye level, and his gloomy shadow covered her.
âYour father was useless, your mother was a traitor, and your brother⊠well he was rubbish, meant to be disposed of.â
What did he mean by that?! Did he⊠kill Pietro? The thought terrified her, everything about this place terrified her, but perhaps the worst part of it was she knew no one was coming to save her.
She was alone, absolutely alone.
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.â
ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹDecember 11, 2023 at 12:52 pm #169150Anonymous
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@smiley WANDA!!!!!!
đđđđđđ
(…I held back my tears…but I’m still so sad)
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December 11, 2023 at 1:01 pm #169152@freedomwriter76
(âŠI held back my tearsâŠbut Iâm still so sad)
Wow you have better self-restraint than I do XD
WANDA!!!!!!
I know!!!
I’m writing Pietro’s POV now, and his a little bit less tearful
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.â
ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹDecember 11, 2023 at 3:24 pm #169158@smiley Aww, that’s so horrible, poor girl!
@freedomwriter76 Steve, you’re like 6 foot 2 and 240 pounds of pure muscle, you could fight Dreykov and win if you wanted to!
JK….Dreykov really is the worst if he can terrify Captain America himself into doing his bidding…..
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
December 11, 2023 at 8:45 pm #169238Anonymous
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Iâm writing Pietroâs POV now, and his a little bit less tearful
Ooh, I can’t wait to read it <3
And yes, I even managed to not cry when Natasha died in Endgame when I rewatched it Saturday afternoon!! (but Tony’s funeral got me…like always đđ)
Yeahhh, he could, but Steve has also been brainwashed at this point *poor boi* and Dreykov is also just…*shudders*
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