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  • #116146
    GodlyFantasy12
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      @elishavet-pidyon SO I JUST READ UR THING ABOUT FRITZ AND IT HONESTLY REMINDS ME OF GRIMM!!!

      Anywhoodle!

      @freedomwriter76 @koshka @queen_of_alvastia @gracie-j @ANYONE-WHO-WILL-DARE-LISTEN

      I have returned to this forum……

      With a subject….of great horror….

      One that brings even the greatest of writers (and most noble of readers) to their knees…..

       

      *stands in midst of room, wearing a hooded cape. Removes hood.*

       

      …….Character deaths.

       

       

       

       

       

       

      DUN DUN DUNNNNN….

       

      And yall….

      just….

       

      okay I’m just saying rn…if at all possible, let’s keep any mention of the Wingfeather saga to a minimum (for those who have read it) just cuz it literally gives me deep depression (even tho that series has also helped me make some of my decisions in writing XD)

      #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
      #ProtectMarcel
      #ProtectSeb

      #116147
      Queen_of_Alvastia
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        @godlyfantasy76 Wait…are you saying you just killed one of your charries!?!?!?! DID I JUST READ THAT RIGHT?

        Or you’re planning to?

        I sobbed through Wingfeather and I want to go back and read it BUT I JUST LOANED SOMEONE ALL 4 OF MY BOOKS…

        🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰

        #116148
        GodlyFantasy12
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          @queen_of_alvasta I haven’t killed a Charrie (haven’t been writing recently tbh, and I’m only on book 1 XD)

          but…a death has been in the plan for…well….

          feels like forever now. And I always knew who it would be too. So…heh…

          Also…I dont think I can reread that series….literally.

           

          it was great but thinking too much about it srsly makes my heart too heavy. Soo..I’d rather not

          #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
          #ProtectMarcel
          #ProtectSeb

          #116149
          Anonymous
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            @godlyfantasy12. WHAT!!?? I NEED TO KNOW!!! *hugs November and Paxton tight for comfort* 😫😫😫

            #116150
            Elishavet Elroi
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              @godlyfantasy12

              You did? It does? Yay! Do you like it? 🙂

              I’m contemplating telling y’all Fritz’s real name, but I’d also want to go back and tell you the whole story behind it, and that would take long.

              And YES! Character deaths. I love them about as much as I hate them, which is a lot.

              (And I want to ask who dies, but also don’t know if I want to know.)

              As for my books…

              *Cue mournful music*

              I think I’m killing two characters, but one might escape.

              They’re both my favorites.

              *Weeps*

              But actually, for one, it’s the finale of his story of victory since he grew up in bondage to death (that’s what sin is, basically) and when he does die he has been redeemed by the King of Life, so “though he may die, yet will he live”.

              Honestly, I could talk about character deaths for hours.

              And I understand about Wingfeather. Sadly that was spoiled for me, but it was still so… I cried.

              But like you said, I got a lot of helpful writing tips from those books.

              You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

              #116151
              Koshka
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                @godlyfantasy12

                *Staggers back from hooded figure, then rushes forward on bended knee*

                “Don’t touch November-Ara-Paxton-Grim-or Luna! PLEASE!!!!”

                *Settles back into seat.*

                But, please, do tell.”

                First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
                Fork the Gork

                #116152
                GodlyFantasy12
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                  @elishavet-pidyon OOOF….d-do I want to know?IS IT SOMEONE I KNOW?! (Have been introduce to?!)

                  VIKTOR IS NOT ONE OF THEM RIGHT?!

                   

                  Right?! YOU BETTER NOT DO THAT TO ME! 😭

                   

                  @freedomwriter76 @koshka @queen_of_alvastia what about y’all? Any deaths planned for anyone?

                  And hey, what about Minor character get deaths?

                   

                  or maybe they’re not technically “minor” but they aren’t “main” either.

                  For instance they are side characters, that may have impact on ur readers, but a lot on ur MCs and story.

                  I have a few of those.

                  As for who my person to…well…ya know…is,

                  ahh…I wanna tell u but at the same time, I’m like IS IT TOO BIG OF A SPOILER?!?!

                  what do y’all think? U want me to tell u?

                   

                  #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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                  #116153
                  GodlyFantasy12
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                    U tell me yours and I’ll tell you mine and then we’re even? XD

                    and that ways in case my books don’t ever get finished (which would be my fault)

                    YOU WILL KNOW 🤣

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                    #116154
                    Queen_of_Alvastia
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                      @godlyfantasy12 I don’t have any character deaths planned….

                      SO FAR that is….

                      But I want to know….

                      Who do you kill?

                      (probably going to regret sending you this….)

                      🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰

                      #116155
                      Queen_of_Alvastia
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                        @godlyfantasy12 I do have a question on someone that I’m not sure if they should die or not…If you tell me your spoiler, I’ll tell who I am debating about

                        🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰

                        #116156
                        GodlyFantasy12
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                          @queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

                          Sigh…

                          If you guys really want to know, okay!

                          So, Ive known I was gonna do this for forever now, but things have gone back and forth. It’s always been this character though….

                          *hands tissues to Queenie (that’s ur nickname now)*

                          Its….Jocelyn.

                          *prepares for sadness*

                          #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                          #ProtectMarcel
                          #ProtectSeb

                          #116157
                          Queen_of_Alvastia
                          @queen_of_alvastia
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                            @godlyfantasy12 WHY DID I EVEN ASK YOU!?!

                            *major regret…cries forever*

                            *bawling my head off*

                            *excuse me while I go and hide in my tissue fort!!!*

                            😭😭😭😭

                            I NEED TO COME SAVE HER!!! SOMEHOW!!!

                            🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰

                            #116158
                            Anonymous
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                              @elishavet-pidyon. I think I know EXACTLY who you’re talking about, and I’m crying now. 😭😭😭


                              @godlyfantasy12
                              . TELL ME!!!!! I CAN’T HANDLE THE SUSPENCE! 😫😫😫 Oh, and OF COURSE I have planned character deaths! (what writer doesn’t? 😂) !!!!BUT WARNING!!!! SPOILERS AHEAD!!!! (because I don’t care if I spoil my book. 😂

                              1. Aadelheide in Freedom’s Fire. (dies in the Concentration Camp…probably from a disease. 😭)

                              2. Fin in Freedom’s Fire. (killed by the SS for aiding Jews and refusing to say that he was wrong and regrets his actions. My courageous boy. *sniff* 🥺🥰)

                              3. Jennie in Freedom’s Fire. (dies of…old age? A disease, maybe? I haven’t figured out yet. 😅)

                              4. Leon in Still Good and Freedom’s Fire. (A disease, more than likely. The reason I list two is because I’m planning on the final scene, the epilogue, in Freedom’s Fire being Riker thanking Leon, for the last time, for forgiving him all those years ago. It will show their friendship, how far the two of them have come, and it ends with Riker holding his friend’s hand, tears coursing down his face, but also smiling, knowing now that Leon is happy and they will see each other again. AGH! Bittersweet! 😭💖 And then, of course, in Still Good, Elias gets the news that his father died. 😭)

                              5. Yoshua in Allies and Lies. (Ezra’s best friend. Dies in the plane crash)

                              I believe there are more, but I can’t think of any others right now. 😂😅

                              #116159
                              Koshka
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                                @godlyfantasy12

                                YES, do tell!

                                But to make us even, then yes I do have at least one I’ve got figured out, and an almost death.

                                And none of y’all actually know either of these characters like at all, but anyway.

                                So, I vaguely referred to this in the RP, but Mikkel has a close, close friend named Oswald who’s the medic for his group in the Mariners (this is the same person who has taught Mikkel most of what he knows in medicine). He’s an awesome character with a huge heart, often putting himself at risk to reach wounded.

                                But, during a battle Oswald goes MIA.

                                And is never found.

                                Mikkel is crushed over this and his downhill slide starts escalating.

                                First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
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                                #116160
                                Elishavet Elroi
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                                  @godlyfantasy12

                                  See how I feel?! XD

                                  But no, I haven’t exactly introduced them yet. Or not with a character sketch/excerpt or anything like that. Viktor should live. 😉

                                  Honestly, I would tell, but since I haven’t REALLY introduced them, you might try that coping mechanism where you don’t get close to the character you know will die, and I want y’all to love them as much as I do! (Although it’s okay if you don’t. 😉 )

                                  Plus, it’s a rather large spoiler.

                                  Which I actually already spoiled somewhere else, but you didn’t hear that.

                                  BUT IS IT GRIMM? OR LUNA?! OR, OR CORVINA?!

                                  Please say no!!!

                                  You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

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