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  • #124180
    MineralizedWritings
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      @felicity

      Thanks! Glad you like him!

      I do too 😁

      "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

      #124181
      MineralizedWritings
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        @felicity

        Glad you liked it! 😁 💛

        Pulling people’s heart strings is probably one of my biggest goals as an author! Happy I succeeded 🙂

        And yes, he’s so innocent. 😊

        "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

        #124186
        Keilah H.
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          @mineralizedwritings Ok, I love that!! Their reaction to the rain is so cute and hilarious!

          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

          #124189
          MineralizedWritings
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            @keilah-h

            Thanks! 😀

            "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

            #124204
            Keilah H.
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              @mineralizedwritings You’re welcome!

              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

              #124242
              whaley
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                @mineralizedwritings

                I love this! I can tell it was inspired by City of Ember, but it obviously has its own unique charm

                “Everything is a mountain”

                #124246
                MineralizedWritings
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                  @whalekeeper

                  Glad you like it! It’s super weird how it went that direction without me even thinking about it lol. It started off underground the whole time, but the story was different for a long time. The plot I was first using Tauren had a twin brother who was sent out of the bunker to go to war, and Tauren was sent too, but more of too prove himself. Boy, things change. The end goal was to have Tauren wandering around in a city with his pet pigeon and guitar meeting all kinds of people from all kinds of places. I still really like travel/journeying stories, and I might do one again. It just slowly changed and became more like the city of ember, I mean it was my favorite book for a very long time. I think the initial story was a bit inspired by “Cry, the beloved country” (Good read btw! Bit of a slow middle though) which we read for school. Wow, it just occurred to me book two of my book is similar in quite a few ways too that one.

                  "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                  #124279
                  Anonymous
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                    @felicity

                    My MC’s dad. He sacrifices his life for his kid and his kid’s friends (the other MC’s). He is also a good guy turned bad guy.

                    #124283
                    TheLoonyOne
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                      @mineralizedwritings

                      (to read a spoiler or not… 🤣)

                      Oh I’m doing it… 😏

                      😁 I love those two! Their reactions to the storm were kinda sad and adorable at the same time 😂 And when they got over their fear and started playing in the rain! I loved it!

                      #124341
                      MineralizedWritings
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                        @theloonyone

                        Yay! 😁 glad you like it! and yeah 😥 a little sad, but they got over it!

                        "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                        #124363
                        Felicity
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                          @sarafini

                          Ok! That’s sad but…sweet, because he saves their lives.

                          • This reply was modified 1 year, 11 months ago by Felicity.

                          He must increase, but I must decrease.

                          #124401
                          Anonymous
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                            @felicity

                            I know. That emoji right there > 🥲 sums it up. I feel like happy crying whenever I think about it but I can never shed a tear. I can sometimes while watching tear-jerkers but never while reading books. Anybody else have that problem?

                            #129742
                            Esther
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                              @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @whalekeeper @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise

                              Ok…

                              So I know not all of you have read my WIP but… I really really want to give away a spoiler. I refuse to tell my siblings. I want them to wait for it. XD But I’ll let y’all know…

                              So… Would you like to know?

                              It just may happen to be about someone dying

                              Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                              #129744
                              Light
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                                @esther-c

                                Oooh…tell away!! I love spoilers lol. Oh gosh…please tell me it’s not Lukas, Ami, or Ev. Those are my favorites. Wait…or is it in your other book?

                                 

                                #HugRikerSquad

                                #129747
                                GodlyFantasy12
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                                  @esther-c AHHH A CHARACTER DEATH?!

                                   

                                   

                                  ok yes tell me….

                                   

                                   

                                  AS LONG AS IT ISN’T LUKAS OR TY….I will be ok…

                                  #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                                  #ProtectMarcel
                                  #ProtectSeb

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