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December 12, 2022 at 2:55 pm #124180
Thanks! Glad you like him!
I do too 😁
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 12, 2022 at 2:58 pm #124181Glad you liked it! 😁 💛
Pulling people’s heart strings is probably one of my biggest goals as an author! Happy I succeeded 🙂
And yes, he’s so innocent. 😊
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 12, 2022 at 3:20 pm #124186@mineralizedwritings Ok, I love that!! Their reaction to the rain is so cute and hilarious!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 12, 2022 at 3:21 pm #124189December 12, 2022 at 3:51 pm #124204@mineralizedwritings You’re welcome!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 12, 2022 at 6:07 pm #124242I love this! I can tell it was inspired by City of Ember, but it obviously has its own unique charm
“Everything is a mountain”
December 12, 2022 at 6:15 pm #124246Glad you like it! It’s super weird how it went that direction without me even thinking about it lol. It started off underground the whole time, but the story was different for a long time. The plot I was first using Tauren had a twin brother who was sent out of the bunker to go to war, and Tauren was sent too, but more of too prove himself. Boy, things change. The end goal was to have Tauren wandering around in a city with his pet pigeon and guitar meeting all kinds of people from all kinds of places. I still really like travel/journeying stories, and I might do one again. It just slowly changed and became more like the city of ember, I mean it was my favorite book for a very long time. I think the initial story was a bit inspired by “Cry, the beloved country” (Good read btw! Bit of a slow middle though) which we read for school. Wow, it just occurred to me book two of my book is similar in quite a few ways too that one.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 13, 2022 at 7:30 am #124279Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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My MC’s dad. He sacrifices his life for his kid and his kid’s friends (the other MC’s). He is also a good guy turned bad guy.
December 13, 2022 at 11:22 am #124283(to read a spoiler or not… 🤣)
Oh I’m doing it… 😏
😁 I love those two! Their reactions to the storm were kinda sad and adorable at the same time 😂 And when they got over their fear and started playing in the rain! I loved it!
December 13, 2022 at 9:27 pm #124341Yay! 😁 glad you like it! and yeah 😥 a little sad, but they got over it!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 14, 2022 at 9:36 am #124363@sarafini
Ok! That’s sad but…sweet, because he saves their lives.
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He must increase, but I must decrease.
December 14, 2022 at 2:10 pm #124401Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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I know. That emoji right there > 🥲 sums it up. I feel like happy crying whenever I think about it but I can never shed a tear. I can sometimes while watching tear-jerkers but never while reading books. Anybody else have that problem?
January 23, 2023 at 2:33 pm #129742@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @whalekeeper @sarafini @gwyndalf-the-wise
Ok…
So I know not all of you have read my WIP but… I really really want to give away a spoiler. I refuse to tell my siblings. I want them to wait for it. XD But I’ll let y’all know…
So… Would you like to know?
It just may happen to be about someone dyingWrite what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 23, 2023 at 2:43 pm #129744Oooh…tell away!! I love spoilers lol. Oh gosh…please tell me it’s not Lukas, Ami, or Ev. Those are my favorites. Wait…or is it in your other book?
#HugRikerSquad
January 23, 2023 at 2:59 pm #129747@esther-c AHHH A CHARACTER DEATH?!
ok yes tell me….
AS LONG AS IT ISN’T LUKAS OR TY….I will be ok…
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