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October 27, 2022 at 9:28 am #120510Anonymous
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@koshka. @elishavet-pidyon. @godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h. Okay…so…I haven’t been on here for a while…but…I’m in the plotting stages of a book…y’know…trying to figure out where I want it to go…and…you see…
Okay…this is only a possibility…but I also don’t know if I should talk about it either…maybe leave it as a surprise when I write the scene…or just not mention it because Godly will probably come after me… xD
But…I was also like…well, it’s not for certain yet…so maybe I’m safe…
…okay…do y’all want to hear about another POSSIBLE character death…? A very small possibility…I’m still planning the book…and not even sure if it would fit the story or not…
…but…does anyone want to hear…?
October 27, 2022 at 11:14 am #120511@freedomwriter76 😒😒😒😒
XD
of course we want to hear it!! XD XD XD WE ARE WRITERS!!! TELL US!! (And the we shall be sad about it lol)
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 11:34 am #120512Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @keilah-h. (oh, and if you DON’T want to hear it, don’t read this, alright? xD)
Okay…if you’re certain about this…I suppose I shall tell you about the (possible) character death…
…which may or may not happen…
…and if it does, I DO have a “why”, which I will get to after talking about the death.
You see…the book that this is going to be in…
…is a book about an Anti-Nazi resistance underground group…
…and…well…you see…
…thus…
…it’s about…The Bois.
So…the Novel doesn’t have a title yet…
…but that’s who it’s about.
And…you see…
…being a part of a Anti-Nazi Resistance group comes with it’s own dangers…
…especially when one of your stepbrothers is in the SS.
But…as they struggle…with their past…
…as the war rages on…
…one of them finally finds healing….answering Joshua’s prayers.
But we’re not done yet…
…because though he is healed…
…his brothers, except Joshua, aren’t…
…but he wants them to be.
And…you see…
…following Fin Müller’s death…
…the SS is figuring out that there IS an Anti-Nazi Resistance Group that’s sabotaging the Nazi’s and rescuing Jews…
…and that…
…comes with problems.
They’re helping another Jewish family escape Germany…
…when they hear voices…footsteps…
…hounds.
And the family is in danger…
…and someone will need to distract the SS guards.
But that itself comes with dangers…
…and without letting the ones helping him know…the healed brother knows that he needs to do it…
…for that escaping family…
…for his brothers…
…for his nation…
…for the future…
…for his God.
So…the family and his brothers hide…so the guards don’t find them…
…and before they can protest…
…he goes…
…to distract the guards…
…the family and his brothers calling for him to come back…
…but he doesn’t.
He has to do this…
…and…
He wants to do this.
He’s since learned…
…after being saved…
…that love…
…is often a sacrifice.
He always loved people…
…even though he was once afraid to do so…
…but he’s not afraid anymore.
He distracts the guards…
…and the family is recued…
…but he doesn’t make it out…
…and…
Wolfgang gives his life for his brothers.
October 27, 2022 at 11:36 am #120515Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And now I wait to be attacked. xD
October 27, 2022 at 11:52 am #120517@freedomwriter76
i just cried….
this is the first time you’ve made me cry freedom….
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 11:53 am #120519I haven’t cried for any of the others….none of them…
But I’m crying right now….
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 11:55 am #120520Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. OH MY GOSH!
I’M SO SORRY!!!! I DIDN’T MEAN TO MAKE YOU CRY!!!! 😭😭😭💔💔💔
October 27, 2022 at 11:55 am #120521I’m heartbroken….
but I understand it…
but I’m heartbroken…
just like with the Wingfeather saga…
(I can’t think or talk about those books anymore….btw….without crying/feeling depressed heh…I think I’ve gotten better tho)
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 11:56 am #120522@freedomeriter76 ah it’s okay, it shows how much I love the Bois!!
and I’m a very emotional and character driven person lol!!
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 11:58 am #120523Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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And now I don’t want to kill him.
I never did in the first place…
…but I thought…
…it would work for the theme/story…
…but now I feel like a horrible person, heh. 😭
October 27, 2022 at 12:04 pm #120524@freedomwriter76 don’t!!! It’s what Authors do lol!!
And I mean….
we could always do the plot twist thing (since I doubt you’ve ever done that it would probably work and not be cliche for u) and have where they put him in a camp or something
IDK
i’m not a history buff….
XD XD XD
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 12:33 pm #120525Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah…I guess so…
And great idea! That actually sounds like it could be fun! (and yeah…everyone else has just died…)
October 27, 2022 at 12:34 pm #120526@freedomwriter76 THERE IS HOPE AHHH
OH HEY ALSO u free to RP? Maybe? XD
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 12:35 pm #120527Because I’ve gotten a small break now. Dunno for how long buuut yea
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 12:35 pm #120528Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. XD
I think I did. Did I not tag you? xD I may have…XD
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