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March 10, 2021 at 8:41 pm #95252
Aww, THANKS!!!!!! 🙂 Yeah, it’s hard to finish a book, but you’re doing an INCREDIBLE job with your story!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33
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TeenWritersNook.comMarch 10, 2021 at 8:59 pm #95253Thank you so much for the encouragement!
A wolf is a wolf,
even in a cage,
even dressed in silk.March 10, 2021 at 9:01 pm #95254You’re welcome!!! Anytime!
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TeenWritersNook.comMarch 10, 2021 at 11:46 pm #95260I’d LOVE to read this!!! (slow reader warning XD ), this is so awesome, I cannot wait!! 😀
March 11, 2021 at 12:00 am #95262@issawriter7 Ohhh this sounds coolll!!! I love retellings. I’ll gladly read!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 11, 2021 at 3:32 am #95265*fails* I am so beyond excited to read this!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read this since the first time I’ve heard about it and now I get the chance to read some of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m so excited right now. It is such a treat!!!!!! I can’t wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!! I also will take a while to get around to read it, but I will read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
March 11, 2021 at 8:31 am #95267YAAAY!!!!!! I’m SO, SO, SOOO happy to hear!!!! *jumps up and down* (LOL!! That’s okay. I’m a veryyy slow reader myself. 😉 ) YES!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comMarch 11, 2021 at 8:32 am #95268YES!!! THANK YOU!!!!! Oooh, really? Same here!! *high fives* Yaay!! That means SO much to me!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you enjoy it!! <3
God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comMarch 11, 2021 at 8:39 am #95269Aww, girl, that’s just made MY DAY!!!!! Wow, really? Man, if I knew that I would’ve been giving you this loooooooong before now. 😉 You are seriously allowed to read any of my stories that you like. Girl, that just means SOOO much to me!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU A THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAY!!!! I really hope you enjoy it!!! That’s TOTALLY okay, girl!!!!!!! No worries whatsoever!!! <33
God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comMarch 11, 2021 at 1:20 pm #95284Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@issawriter7 Girl, I am so sorry I haven’t gotten to this sooner! I am SO stoked to read this, so I’ll get on it straightway! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing!!!!!!!!
March 11, 2021 at 2:29 pm #95294Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@issawriter7 AH! That was fantastic!!! I can’t wait to read more! And Colin was perfect!!!
March 11, 2021 at 4:32 pm #95304@gracie-j
Oh, that’s TOTALLY okay!!!!!!!!!! I’m SO happy for how excited you were to read some of my story. Oh, you’re welcome. 🙂 And THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for taking the time to read it!!!!!!!!! Aww, you really enjoyed it? That just means SOOO MUCH!!!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!! YAAY!!! I might not share anymore on KP, though. I was waaaaay too nervous about that. XD It’s hard for me to get myself to ask people to read my work.
which could explain why it’s hard for me to get beta readersOkay, this comment is turning too long. Sorry ’bout my rambling. XD Aww, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Colin’s like mah boy. 😉 <333God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comMarch 11, 2021 at 8:15 pm #95316Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@issawriter7 Of course!! 🙂 And don’t be nervous, girl! Share your gift!!
March 11, 2021 at 10:45 pm #95335Hey Issabelle! Long time no see! Sorry I haven’t been around much (been trying to take a break from my computer for the past week or so.) Anyway, that’s great that you’re seeking feedback for your story! Like Grace just said, don’t be nervous! Just take it one step at a time. 🙂
So, I’m not sure I’ll be able to critique your work (actually, I just realized I’m behind on your Robyn Hood story *whaaaa-?* Sorry about that *embarrassed grin*)Â But, if it’s okay, I’ll aim to read it on Friday/Saturday when I have more time.
By the way, how has your week been?
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March 12, 2021 at 12:17 pm #95365@issawriter7 I left some comments! Great job!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
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