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  • #95252
    Issabelle Perry
    @issawriter7
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      @millennium

      Aww, THANKS!!!!!! 🙂 Yeah, it’s hard to finish a book, but you’re doing an INCREDIBLE job with your story!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33

      God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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      #95253
      RainyEmily
      @millennium
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        @issawriter7

        Thank you so much for the encouragement!

        A wolf is a wolf,
        even in a cage,
        even dressed in silk.

        #95254
        Issabelle Perry
        @issawriter7
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          @millennium

          You’re welcome!!! Anytime!

          God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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          #95260
          Abigail.M.
          @abigail-m
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            @issawriter7

            I’d LOVE to read this!!! (slow reader warning XD ), this is so awesome, I cannot wait!! 😀

            #95262
            Daisy Torres
            @daisy-torres
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              @issawriter7 Ohhh this sounds coolll!!! I love retellings. I’ll gladly read!!

              "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

              #95265
              Ribbonash
              @ribbonash
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                @issawriter7

                *fails* I am so beyond excited to read this!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read this since the first time I’ve heard about it and now I get the chance to read some of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m so excited right now. It is such a treat!!!!!! I can’t wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!! I also will take a while to get around to read it, but I will read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                #95267
                Issabelle Perry
                @issawriter7
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                  @abigail-m

                  YAAAY!!!!!! I’m SO, SO, SOOO happy to hear!!!! *jumps up and down* (LOL!! That’s okay. I’m a veryyy slow reader myself. 😉 ) YES!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                  God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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                  #95268
                  Issabelle Perry
                  @issawriter7
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                    @daisy-torres

                    YES!!! THANK YOU!!!!! Oooh, really? Same here!! *high fives* Yaay!! That means SO much to me!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you enjoy it!! <3

                    God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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                    #95269
                    Issabelle Perry
                    @issawriter7
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                      @ribbonash

                      Aww, girl, that’s just made MY DAY!!!!! Wow, really? Man, if I knew that I would’ve been giving you this loooooooong before now. 😉 You are seriously allowed to read any of my stories that you like. Girl, that just means SOOO much to me!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU A THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAY!!!! I really hope you enjoy it!!! That’s TOTALLY okay, girl!!!!!!! No worries whatsoever!!! <33

                      God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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                      #95284
                      Anonymous
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                        @issawriter7 Girl, I am so sorry I haven’t gotten to this sooner! I am SO stoked to read this, so I’ll get on it straightway! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing!!!!!!!!

                        #95294
                        Anonymous
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                          @issawriter7 AH! That was fantastic!!! I can’t wait to read more! And Colin was perfect!!!

                          #95304
                          Issabelle Perry
                          @issawriter7
                            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                            • Total Posts: 976

                            @gracie-j

                            Oh, that’s TOTALLY okay!!!!!!!!!! I’m SO happy for how excited you were to read some of my story. Oh, you’re welcome. 🙂 And THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for taking the time to read it!!!!!!!!! Aww, you really enjoyed it? That just means SOOO MUCH!!!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!! YAAY!!! I might not share anymore on KP, though. I was waaaaay too nervous about that. XD It’s hard for me to get myself to ask people to read my work. which could explain why it’s hard for me to get beta readers Okay, this comment is turning too long. Sorry ’bout my rambling. XD Aww, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Colin’s like mah boy. 😉 <333

                            God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
                            TeenWritersNook.com

                            #95316
                            Anonymous
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                              @issawriter7 Of course!! 🙂 And don’t be nervous, girl! Share your gift!!

                              #95335
                              imwritehere1920
                              @imwritehere1920
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                                @issawriter7

                                Hey Issabelle!  Long time no see!  Sorry I haven’t been around much (been trying to take a break from my computer for the past week or so.) Anyway, that’s great that you’re seeking feedback for your story!  Like Grace just said, don’t be nervous!  Just take it one step at a time. 🙂

                                So, I’m not sure I’ll be able to critique your work (actually, I just realized I’m behind on your Robyn Hood story *whaaaa-?* Sorry about that *embarrassed grin*)  But, if it’s okay, I’ll aim to read it on Friday/Saturday when I have more time.

                                By the way, how has your week been?

                                Dream. Write. Inspire.

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                                #95365
                                Linyang Zhang
                                @devastate-lasting
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                                  @issawriter7 I left some comments! Great job!

                                  Lately, it's been on my brain
                                  Would you mind letting me know
                                  If hours don't turn into days

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