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March 14, 2024 at 4:18 pm #177834
@loopylin Ahhh, I see. And yes, someone needs to confiscate the brush. And maybe get Seb to therapy too?? đ¤
so many of these charries need help, mine included.
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March 16, 2024 at 5:21 pm #177938Yall my posts aren’t go thruuuu
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2024 at 5:21 pm #177939Oh hallelujah it is now
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2024 at 5:22 pm #177940I MADE AN RP A WHILE BACK AND IT DIDN’T POST EVEN THO IT SAID IT DID SCRREEEEEECH
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2024 at 5:22 pm #177941I AM SO AGRAVATED AND DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO RP NOOOOW SOOOOOOOOBBBBBB
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#ProtectSebMarch 16, 2024 at 7:10 pm #177946@godlyfantasy12  Oh noooooo⌠đ Do you remember some of what you wrote at least?
âEverything is a mountainâ
March 16, 2024 at 7:12 pm #177947Wyoh has been very kind to me XD I lose a post maybe once or twice a month. Pics still work horribly though.
âEverything is a mountainâ
March 16, 2024 at 7:52 pm #177949Sebzter
Seb did not know immediately where the power box was, especially in the dark. How unpractical of him not to ask.
Luckily the location could be guessed. He only knew of two janitor-type closets with enough security to potentially hold the power. One upstairs, and one down, where he already was. And Ellie should have taken much less time to reach the second-story closet.
When he came to the door, he gave it a rhythmic knock. âMadame Ellie of the Secretive Demeanor?â
After some hesitation and scuffling, the door opened just enough for him to squeeze through.
Seb struck a spare match, and coughed when he realized they were a party of three. âI am seeing double! My preparations have convinced me more than I anticipated.â
âIâm Eddie, the sister who never gets told anything.â The second girl nudged the first with her shoulder. They looked startlingly similar at first, but Eddie clearly did not have the same reserved body language as Ellie.
âAh. Different colored hoodies, too.â
âSo what is the rest of the plan?â
Seb could barely ignore the bubbly white light behind his eyelids. It was like a giant red button he wasnât allowed to press. And he loved pressing buttons, real or emotional. âEither you two steal back the loot and I distract, or vice versa. Personally I prefer making a big deal of myself whenever I can, and I know at least one of you is not inclined to do the same. Sweet? Not sweet?â
âŚ
Iâm just imagining tiny twin ninjas leaping and crawling under desks đ¤Łđ¤Ł Or they can distract. Up to them/you.
âEverything is a mountainâ
March 16, 2024 at 8:04 pm #177951Goodness I did not see those comments – yess, the child needs help. It’s not like anyone would take him seriously though XD
âEverything is a mountainâ
March 17, 2024 at 12:57 am #177959@whalekeeper ok I already wrote part of this scene a couple days ago so imma fit it in somehow
Eddie and Ellie
âGot any fours?â
âNo. Go fish.â
Eddie sighed and drew a card from the pile on the floor. Her wristband buzzed. She ignored it.
âWe were kinda mean to Liko.â
âYeah⌠But heâll get over it. You know the guy would forgive an animal for biting his leg off if he learned it was just hungry. Any threes?â
Eddie handed Ellie a card. Her wristband buzzed again, distracting her from her worry.
âGoodness, the chat is blowing up with messages about the power outage. We really freaked some people out.â
Ellie set down her cards and leaned forward. âWait, thereâs a class group chat and no one has added me?â
âIn my defense, it was just created this morning. And I donât think most of our class even knows you exist, Ellie. You should talk to people.â
âHey, Iâve talked to people.â
âWho? Crazy boy who you said made an explosive out of hairspray? Great. Look where thatâs gotten you.â
Ellie looked around the dim, cramped room.
ââŚThatâs fair.â
Ed looked at her cards again. âAny⌠sevens? Wait, what was that?â
They both heard footsteps outside. In a moment, the cards were shoved into a pocket and the curtain drawn over the window.
[insert stuff you wrote]
âSweet? Not sweet?â
âSweet.â Ed grinned and crossed her arms. âWeâll be the thieves. Sounds more adventurous. Yeah?â She glanced at her sister.
âYeah.â Ellie cocked her head as her eyes adjusted to the matchâs light. She stared intently at Sebastian.
âDid something happen to your head?â
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 17, 2024 at 3:30 pm #177988I have no idea if this format is going to look super dumb or not, but Iâve always wanted to mess with it, and Drama King gives me an opportunity XD
Sebzter
Sebastian accidentally dropped the match, and lit another. “What leads you to believe that?”
“It looks like you bonked it on a desk,” Eddie confirmed her sister’s words, squinting.
When he rubbed his forehead, a small smudge of blood came off in his palm. A solid lump had already formed.
He almost felt surpriseâŚ
Which didnât make sense!
How did he actually feel?
Did he want to cry?
Probably not, if he was any judge of himself judging himself, and judging what emotion was best suited for the occasionâŚ
Was he presenting himself as practical, crazy, or simply sinister? And were all of these his only source of reality?
Questioning this now was a foolâs play, and yetâŚ
Another boy, the submissively unsubmissive caricature, breathed down his neck for attention.
His head hurt.
Oh never mind!
Never mind!
How could he know if a consciousness was just a face mask soaking into his skin, somehow applied from the outside and meticulously sealed into othersâ perception of him?
Into his own perception of himself?
Was it all made up?
At a gruff ahem from Eddie, Seb came to himself (maybe) with a gleaming smile. “I know this is psychologically proven to be the least truthful statement, but I’m fine!”
âEverything is a mountainâ
March 18, 2024 at 1:42 am #178029@whalekeeper I like the format, actually. It feels like spiraling, distracted thoughts. Probably wouldnât work for many other characters other than Seb though lol
Eddie
Ellie locked eyes with Sebastian and stared, her face expressionless. Then she kept staring. And kept staring.
Eddie rolled her eyes. Ellie always did this whenever she was trying to figure out what to say to someone, figure out if they were lying, or for some other mysterious third reason. It was like she was trying to read their soul. Ed would always be the one to break the awkward silence that her sister seemed somehow immune to.
âGreat. Probably should check in with the school nurse after this, though. And maybe try not to headbutt any more desks.â She definitely didnât believe that Seb was fine, but she had only just met him and didnât feel like pushing it. She nudged Ellie, who finally looked away.
âWe ready?â
âYeah.â Ellie tugged on her hoodie sleeve. âBut one more thing. We can leave this door locked when we leave and let someone with keys come fix the power. Buy us more time.â
Lois
The power went out suddenly, dropping the room into darkness. After a moment of surprise, Lois gave a quiet chuckle.
âThis schoolâŚâ he muttered, then louder, âDoes anyone have a light?â
âNothing says autumn like slurpinâ apples.â -my uncle
March 19, 2024 at 4:50 pm #178072Navin
He’d go adventure through the school and get eaten by a random creature which emerged from the darkness if it meant he didn’t have to sit through a class and possibly socialize with more people.
Navin shrugged, “I- I’d rather explore. W- where… where to?”
(Sorry, that wasn’t very long and probably sounds weird. Idk why my brain wasn’t braining very well when I wrote that. Lol.)
- This reply was modified 8 months ago by Beth Torres.
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March 19, 2024 at 9:45 pm #178085@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
So…I’ve been thinking…
I really hate how much im not on and not RP-ing…because I hate how I feel like it keeps yells cherries trapped and unable to RP…but at the same time I don’t want to remove Paxton from the RP…
And maybe im just worrying but…I was thinking maybe, since you both already know him so well and such, if you ever want to, I give you permission to go ahead and RP and write dialogue or whatever you need to for him, moving him along and giving him a voice and such, or a story!
When I do wanna RP I’ll just jump back into whatever you’ve done or if there’s something I don’t really like I’ll let yall know. But this way I don’t feel so bad about not RPing or being on here very much, and yall can move along as needed!
Idk..what do yall think?
(Plus I can read what yall RP XD)
And im not saying maybe RP from his POV, just RP with your cherries, but you have permission to give him voice and story and such, and move liberally with him without having to wait on me.
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