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October 26, 2023 at 10:38 pm #160760
Ottoline
Oh no.
The man approached, sword at his side. She shrank back, looking frantically for Hugo. Her heart beat faster with panic as she saw Hugo talking to Kari and Hedieh and Amir across the room.
She froze.
“Hello, my name is Lord Nahim,” he said.
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a “gentleman” to kill me himself! He probably told him terrible things about me…
“I-I-I’m Ottoline,” she squeaked. She clasped her hands in front of her to hide their trembling. Her knees shook and she tried to control her racing heart. What did he want from her?
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 26, 2023 at 10:41 pm #160762Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a “gentleman” to kill me himself! He probably told him terrible things about me…
oh that’s funny 😂
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October 26, 2023 at 10:45 pm #160765October 26, 2023 at 10:45 pm #160766“I-I-I’m Ottoline.” The girl clasped her hands. She was trembling.
“Are you alright?” ‘She better not be scared of me.’ “Are you chilled?”
"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 10:47 pm #160767Oh man! This will be interesting.
Also, how do you correctly pronounce ‘Ottoline’?
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"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 10:57 pm #160772Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
Ottoline
“Are you chilled?” He asked.
“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.
“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him gratefully. Thank goodness.
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 26, 2023 at 11:01 pm #160773From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.
Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD
(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)
(just kidding.)
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 26, 2023 at 11:06 pm #160775Nahim
“She’s alright.” Nahim spun around. All it was was one of guys he had seen at the party. Nahim looked at Ottoline. She was still trembling a little, but she seemed relieved by the presence of the other man. “She’s just a little on edge.” ‘Yeh, she’s afraid of me.’
“Ottoline, that’s a pretty name, it fits you. Well, what I wanted to ask you was how well you use that bow of yours? And if you are willing to work as a team. ‘Divided we stand, divided we fall, but if united we stand, we will not fall.'”
Thanks for the pronunciation! I was wondering about that.
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"You need French Toast."
October 27, 2023 at 8:04 am #160784Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
That’s funny, I’ve been pronouncing it that way, but I never thought that it might be pronounced differently. The way it’s spelled it could easily be pronounced “ot-ol-in-ay” or something like that although that would be pretty silly!
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 27, 2023 at 8:08 am #160785“Well, what I wanted to ask you was how well you use that bow of yours? And if you are willing to work as a team. ‘Divided we stand, divided we fall, but if united we stand, we will not fall.’”
Very direct XD
Probably the best way to approach this topic, actually.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 27, 2023 at 8:37 am #160787Ellis
Ellis ignored the weird guy and turned back to Kaine. “What I wanted to know was, how well can you fight?”
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@grcr, once again, Flaz can interrupt if you want. Flaz has successfully made Ellis speechless, lol. For every other character he’s talked to, Ellis always had something to say, but not with Flaz XD.🏰 Fantasy Writer
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 27, 2023 at 8:44 am #160788Is Leon armed? And how old is he? I can’t find where you introduced him.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
October 27, 2023 at 8:51 am #160789Attention all!
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @freedomwriter76 (I think I got everyone)Due to the large amount of people RPing, it seems that people keep getting confused with what’s happening, so to fix that, I’m going to start doing a daily recap. This won’t fix the problem entirely, but it should at least make it so you don’t have to look back as far. I’ll include where each character is, as well as any notable events that would affect everyone.
Recap
Nahim is talking to Ottoline, and Hugo is nearby.
Lane’s whereabouts are unknown.
Ellis is trying to talk to Kaine, but keeps getting interrupted by Flaz
Kari and Hedeih are at the table somewhere in the room. (Somebody threw that detail in at some point, but I’m sure the owners of those characters don’t have to do that.)
Amir’s whereabouts are unknown.
Zahlin is interrogating Leon.
And Freedom’s character (sorry, can’t remember his name) hasn’t showed up yet.
Hopefully people find this helpful. I’ll try to do one of these everyday either as early as possible after I wake up, or as late as possible before I go to sleep.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 27, 2023 at 8:52 am #160790I think he has a sword. I’ll try to find where he was introduced.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 27, 2023 at 8:53 am #160791Looks: Light brown hair in loose curls, brown eyes, slim build and bold eyebrows. He wears very medieval village clothing. Height: 5′ 6″ age: 16, carrying sword in belt sheath
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