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November 22, 2023 at 8:05 pm #166187
Kate
“I’m bruised all over from that door, and I’ve got a cut on my shoulder, but I’ll be able to fix myself up. You?”
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:13 pm #166188Ellis
Ellis blinked back the darkness at the edges of his vision as Dlek approached him.
That…was not fair at all.
Dlek raised his sword.
Conviction let out a scream from behind Dlek, as though someone was attacking.
Dlek wheeled around.
Ha ha! Sucker!
Ellis leapt forward and wrapped his arms around Dlek’s neck. Dlek dropped his sword as he groped at Ellis’s arms trying to pry him off. Suddenly, Dlek’s body became lighter, but his left arm became lighter…and stronger, and pulled one of Ellis’s arms free, swinging him over his shoulder onto the ground.
Ellis landed right next to his sword, and he grabbed on. He kicked upward, propelling himself up and kicking Dlek in the face. Dlek staggered backward.
Ellis leapt forward, swinging his sword at Dlek.
Dlek grabbed Ellis’s hand by the wrist, his arm strengthening again.
But Ellis thought he had figured out how Dlek’s strange power worked: when he strengthened his arm, it was as though he was siphoning strength and weight from the rest of his body.
Ellis kicked Dlek in the leg. It felt like kicking an empty bucket. Ellis stepped to the side as Dlek stumbled forward. Then he rammed his shouder into Dlek, sending him sprawling to the side.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:14 pm #166189I’ll take that as a no, Ellis does not need help with Dlek XD
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November 22, 2023 at 8:15 pm #166190My characters don’t have anything to do :/
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November 22, 2023 at 8:15 pm #166191Zahlin can kill some random Gilganings. We really don’t have enough villains.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:16 pm #166192I’m pretty sure EVERYONE except RAE’s villain(s?) and Zash are going to end up defecting XD
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November 22, 2023 at 8:17 pm #166193With Vethe having defected, we only have Zash, Dlek, Rigere, Marcurious, and Kian I think. Zash just got thrown through a wall, so he’s out for a bit. Dlek is fighting Ellis. Rigere is attacking Nora and the queen. Marcurious…isn’t doing anything. Kian isn’t either, but @esther-c isn’t around right now.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:18 pm #166194November 22, 2023 at 8:19 pm #166195We seriously should add more villains. ‘Cause yeah, Dlek and Marcurious will probably defect at some point, leaving only three. I would add another if not enough people wanted to, although I have 4 characters in here already, which is the most of anyone, unless you count Fennin, Queen Silvae, and Tren for Rae, which we probably should.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:20 pm #166196November 22, 2023 at 8:22 pm #166197@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @acancello @trailblazer @esther-c @beth-torres @keilah-h (I think that’s everyone)
Does anyone want to add a(nother) villain? It wouldn’t be right now, but we have a serious shortage, especially since a lot of them might eventually defect.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:23 pm #166198How OP are we talking?
I was originally going to do Vilsayor, but I decided that his powers aren’t the best for this RP. Not necessarily OP, because they have limitations, but they would let him kill our heroes super easily, and we can’t have that. I could come up with someone else to do though if I have to.
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:24 pm #166199Fennin continued
Finally reaching the end of the staircase, Fennin burst through the trap door above him. With a cry of war and challenge, he sprang onto the roof of the palace, his sword to the ready.
The sight he saw angered him.
The Stone. The white milky stone with threads of gold that protected the palace and it’s grounds, had been removed from it’s place. A deed that could only be done my Lillening hand.
That Lillening hand now held the stone up to a dragon. Fennin yelled, his hand glowing a base of gold before turning white. He let loose a ball of energy, surging through the air and hitting the dragon on the nose. The small dragon gave a shriek, and flew away from the Lillening. Fennin set the point of his sword to the traitor’s back.
“Give it to me, before I run you through.” The eyes of pastel green and pink looked into his.
“You wouldn’t dare. I am supposed to marry you.” Clenching his teeth, Fennin answered.
“Stella, why? Only the hand of a Lillening who has touched something staining of all the stones can touch the Golden One. Why have you betrayed us? Give me that stone.”
“No!”
“I will run you through Stella. ”
“No!” Fennin took a deep breath, and pushed the blade. He could hear each on of his heartbeats pounding in his chest in that moment, he could hear each breath scraping through his nostrils. Every movement of his body seemed slow and audible. He reached for the stone and grasping it in his fingertips, pushed Stella over the edge of the palace roof. He had stabbed her slightly, but he couldn’t run her through.
He turned away before he could see if she hit the ground or if the dragon had saved her, tears pricking his eyes.
Stella. Stella. Why was it Stella who turned traitor? Stella. Good-natured, kind Stella.
Taking the stone, Fennin set it in it’s place facing west, set on the highest tower of the palace.
It glowed it’s gold again.
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November 22, 2023 at 8:24 pm #166200(Oops, I thought you were askingΒ meΒ if I was considering another villain. @rae had one or two I think.)
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π Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:25 pm #166201Well, I’m not exactly sure. Since he’s from Celestiar I can chop off some of his abilities *cough* teleportation *cough* but he still might be a bit too powerful. I can make it work, though.
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