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June 7, 2023 at 2:35 pm #146759
@freedomwriter76
Noo!! Viola shall never have Bucky!!!!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:June 7, 2023 at 3:20 pm #146778@zemira Totally!! Do you want a description of my character or anything first, or do you just want to
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Crosshair
“Don’t shoot.” Riker warned.
“Yes, that’d be wise.” said one of the new men.
He looked dangerous somehow……
His movements reminded Crosshair of Rampart or Tarkin……two men he’d rather forget he’d spent time in the company of…..
Paxton squealed in fear as he noticed the woman who stood there also.
He sensed it too….
These people, or at least most of them, were not to be trusted.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 7, 2023 at 5:01 pm #146792Sure! Thanks gals…uh, after I describe them do I just leave them in the castle to wander or are we staying in a group?
So…if y’all haven’t noticed, I only have two characters: Seren&Neviam. Here we go…
Seren: I’m not sure about his ethnicity, his age here in this forum is 18, he’s sweet, kind, loving, very smart, has a sense of humor (watch out for that), some of his talents include being able to fit in almost anywhere and his healing power through the encouragement and words he speaks. He has a fear of not being enough and a fear of dying. His childhood was pretty decent; homeschooled child, loved and experienced God from a young age; his mother gave birth to twins (him being the eldest) but his brother did not make it. And his parents were not able to bear again, leaving him an only child.
His appearance, about 5’7, dark, long brown hair, tan skin, muscular but not too much; often seen wearing jeans and a t-shirt. Oh! If you know artists (singers), think Alec Benjamin looks!Neviam: To give a little depth to her, she’s about 5’2, dark black hair that is shoulder length, chocolate brown eyes, pink to pale skin, and she generally is seen wearing baggy clothing (a sweater and jeans is normal, shirt always tucked in). Her age varies throughout her story. She had a traumatic childhood; her father left to join the military when she was 5 and her mother beats her for not having enough strength to do anything or to keep up. Her mother would often times put her underneath the kitchen sink overnight or even lock her in the basement for days. It went on like this until she was about 7 years old when her mother eventually left her locked in a closet; which is where Seren, a young boy of the age 9, comes into play. The two are best friends forever, a romantic couple, and together, they truly can never be stopped.
Although she has trauma, Nev has learned that through God her thirst for love can be fully complete.
Her fear is being left behind and not having reciprocated love. Her talent is being able to sense when people are in trouble; whether they are in the room or not, she has the gift by the holy spirit to discern who needs help.hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 7, 2023 at 11:21 pm #146844@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Lesli watches with relief as Luna removes the collar from the boy’s neck. She wrings her hands together, resisting the urge to hug him.
“Did you get enough water, sweetheart?” Lesli refills his glass, sitting down beside him. Her eyes fall down to his dirty hair and scared expression.
“You just know that as long as you’re with us, nobody is ever going to treat you like that again, ok? You deserve better.” She smiles warmly, reaching up to brush his hair out of his eyes.
Ack will he mind? Poor boi’s been through so much ;(
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 7, 2023 at 11:23 pm #146845@freedomwriter76
BUCKY!!
Lol I just read a scene with bucky and got excited, that’s all.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 7, 2023 at 11:24 pm #146846June 7, 2023 at 11:32 pm #146853@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings you know what I’m loving?
the fact that LEGIT KIDS BASICALLY are taking care of Jared…and he’s like in his 20s 😭
IT IS LIKE THE SWEETEST, FLUFFIEST PICTURE OF THESE SWEET KIDS ACTING LIKE DOTING PARENTS AND ADULTS AND JARED IS LIKE A LITTLE BABY BOY WHO JUST NEEDS LOVE
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 7, 2023 at 11:42 pm #146855@godlyfantasy12 I have a question.
hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 7, 2023 at 11:48 pm #146858IKR?? it’s so sweet 😭😭🥰
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 7, 2023 at 11:52 pm #146862@zemira yes?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 7, 2023 at 11:55 pm #146863@godlyfantasy12 How in the world does this castle work? I am so confused…
hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 8, 2023 at 12:05 am #146864@zemira XD what are you confused on?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 8, 2023 at 12:17 am #146865@godlyfantasy12 Like, where do I drop a character? How am going to move around through the castle? Are we in a group or not?
hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 8, 2023 at 12:30 am #146867@zemira ah, so u can basically drop ur Charrie in whenever/wherever u want. Just ask any of the others if they don’t mind u joining their “group”
the groups are basically just what charries have currently met each other in the castle are kinda traveling together rn.
I think u said u we’re gonna meet up with freedom, keilah and mine?
so rn, that is Crosshair, Paxton, Riker and freedoms other charries she just brought in. We’re currently just somewhere random on a bottom floor of the castle XD.
And basically u just move as u wish. If u ever want to leave the group that’s up to u. If u want to stay with the other charries then moving kinda depends on when the group decides to move on, but otherwise yea.
Main thing is getting consent from others on any BIG things (like if ur planning on messing with a character or something) and usually we’ll just politely say if a Charrie does something out of character, and ignore it.
For me, my charries are usually free game XD (I’m so terrible aren’t I XD) but I do love me some angst can’t lie, soooo they’re free game, as long as u don’t kill them 🤣 and I’ll usually just let u know if they’re out of character.
obviously we don’t write RPs for other ppls characters 😂
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 8, 2023 at 12:36 am #146870@godlyfantasy12 Alrighty…so that wrapped up a lot of that…so, let me just get this strait, I’m gonna drop my charries and how would I meet up with yours? Just by tagging y’all?
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healed people, heal others
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