Tristan S.

@ribbonash

Ooo, that sounds really cool. The vibe sounds like something I’d definitely be into.

Did you have any favorite characters in the book?

@seekjustice

Animal behaviour books? Is there a reason, or do you just like to learn about animals? I’m intrigued haha. XD

Oof. Yeah, pretty much every story hinges on the characters. If I don’t…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

There are some surprisingly good Star Wars books out there. Like better than the movies good.

A negative character arc? Man, I now have to order it from the library now. XD

Have you read any other Star Wars books or was Lost Stars your first?

@elfwing

My brother has been telling me to read Children of Hurin and the Silmarill…[Read more]

sorry it keeps eating my reply, so if you get like, five responses you can blame the website i guess? XD

@godlyfantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy well…. *breathes out

I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both sides.

(So maybe have scenes with him being open with Jocelyn at…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 Hi! Thanks for the input. I’ll see how I can improve it for sure! 🙂 I’m not really into emotional scenes of this kind but these two have a special relationship, so I wanted to add it. And this is the first draft which is why there may be repeating words, and thank you for mentioning that as I sometimes forget that kind of stuff X…[Read more]

HI, @mkfairygirl! Thank you SO much for your tips!! I’ll def check out your website for inspiration!:)

@kathleenramm oh man good question! I haven’t actually sat down and read a book in months. I’ve been busy with moving across the country and renos and now moving again XD

I’ve listened through the Hobbit and LOTR several times in the last year in audiobook. The last book I actually held in my hands and read was Children of Hurin. Man, that is a…[Read more]

@gracie-j ok! good to know XD, thanks!

@kathleenramm I know you said most recent, but looking at my books, I’m going to go with the third most recent book I read, Lost Stars by Claudia Gray.

It’s a Star Wars book I bought ages ago but never got around to. Glad I finally did, though. I liked how it was slightly cleaner than most YA out there. I did not like how I failed to see that…[Read more]

@gracie-j yeah I’d say it is KP because that’s happening to me tooat first it scared me because I thought maybe my computer had a virus or something, XD but I tried my phone and it did the same thing 

@gracie-j

Oh, my condolences.  Shall I asked how you did it?

Hmm, so strange thing.  I just entered the forum and was looking to see who’s been on recently, and I came across the name *you guessed it* William Starkey!  *gasp*  I do think his ghost has come back to haunt your new manor! (My sister said that if she were a ghost, she’d haunt my cab…[Read more]

Hi @keilah-h,

Okay! I will consider that! Thank you!!😊

@jenwriter17

Ahh! I see! Okay thank you! That IS very helpful! I will definitely do that!:)

@seekjustice

Thank so much!! You’re advice on topics was very helpful! I will definitely keep in mind what I want my target audience to be! Your blog was really neat! Thank you for sharing:)

@jenwriter17

Thank you for your tips, especially on branding and colors and figuring out a mission!! Oh, sorry if this is a stupid question but what did…[Read more]

@gracie-j ok, yeah it wouldn’t let me respond for almost half an hour , then it finally loaded the response box 😂

my wifi is fine, it might be my account?

@gracie-j
Thanks! By the way am I the only one having trouble loading the page??? It’s been acting weird today. Wouldn’t load the website and errors and stuff…