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Active 5 years ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Including the gospel without being cheesy in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daeus Thank you for sharing this!!! Â I so agree! Â You put something hard to explain in simple terms. Â Yeah, I actually started writing Mahinia when I was searching for answers for myself. Â Its been a learning journey for both me and my character.
By the way, what are all the turtles for?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Well, Hello, People! in the forum Start HERE 8 years ago
@annaberens Hi!  Your book names sound intriguing!  And wow, someone has as many books going at one time as I do.  🙂  Do you have a favorite time era to write in?  Do you like to sing or draw?  Also, if you tag us like we tagged you, we will get an email telling us you said something to us.  Exited your here!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x Yes!!! Â Can I be a character!!!?? Â You can look me up in the Character Search Corner like Sam mentioned, or I can rewrite everything here if you want me to.
And Im only scared of dragons until I get to know them.  I was scared of Snapper at first, but not anymore.  🙂
@sam-kowal Thank you for tagging me! Â It would’ve been trag…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@celticcailin My email is imexinart@gmail.com and be sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.  You might send it to a few other people, though, cause I am not sure I will be much help. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years ago
@skye I apologize for pelting you with questions without answering them for me too. 🙂 I am fifteen and we live in Missouri even though we are moving.  What book are you writing, and what is your main character’s name?  My book I am working on (the most prominent one anyway) is called “Mahinia”, and the main character is a girl named Mahinia.  …[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years ago
@skye Neat!  I like drawing horses and people too.  Your profile picture is cute. 🙂  Where do you live?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@aratrea Where can I find that sheet on Story Embers?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@alia Wonderful!!!  😀
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@gh24682468999 Also, having your MC’s personality different than your sidekicks personality can be more interesting and realistic than if they are the same. Â I guess, all of your characters will be different while always having a little of you in them too.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@alia. Ooh, I love it! Â Now I want to read the whole thing!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@annaberens. Hi! Â Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! Â Do you know how to post topics and such? Â Glad you are here!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@celticcailin Hi!  Very few of my songs turn out fit to sing. 🙂  Do you feel comfortable posting any of your songs so we can see them?  (Its totally fine if you don’t.)  Sounds like you already have some better advice anyway. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@gh24682468999 I think my favorite thing about writing is creating my characters!  I never thought when I began writing that I would feel so close to my characters.  Sometimes I’m like, “I am so sorry I have to put you through this, my dear character, but its for the best I promise!  You will triumph in the end!”  🙂
Is it your characters per…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Thank you for your prayers!  God has given some pretty clear direction, even though its not always been what we would have chosen. 🙂 Please do keep praying.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years ago
@skye Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! Â How old are you? Â Do you like to draw? Â So glad your here!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@skredder I love it!!! Â Nice job!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@mnvalentine Thank you for sharing!  I do agree with Elizabeth and Skredder.  It is a little to dull and slow moving, even though its great for establishing some facts.  I like how you described the characters.  Now I am curious to read more. 🙂  I have terrible times with my first chapters too.  So exiting you are so close to publishing!
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Snapper posted an update 8 years ago
Hey guys! 😀 So seems like everyone’s taking a hiatus. 😛 I’m going to as well. Whatnot with NaNo, School, blogging and trying to get my book ready for publication, I need more time than I have. So I shall return, but for now, I’m on a vacation. I’ll still be posting on my blog and I’ll be on facebook too. 😀 Visit me!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years ago
@skredder Ugh…
It was pretty good! Today, incredibly enough, was the first time in my entire life I have ever dyed eggs.
Except with the holiday, I’m NOT ready for Monday… 😛
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Aw, you too?! *sniffs* this is too much.
Well I hope you have a great hiatus! 🙂 We’ll have to have some celebratory part when you, Dekreel, and Warren return. 😉 when do you think you’ll be back?
Not you too! *sighs* When will you return? Can I still tag you?
@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Absolutely you can still tag me. 🙂 I just might not be able to respond all the time, but I love hearing from you all. <3
And I expect to return within a week or few. Certainly no longer than May 1.
@dragon-snapper Okay! 😀 At least you guys aren’t taking super long hiatuses 🙂
*waves good bye to another friend* Please return… You will be missed.
So long for now, Chosen Kid. :3