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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.
I think you were pretty detailed. You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.
I have a good idea of the guy. His face is not clear in my mind though.
The emotion was good. It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though. A few words describing it a little more would help.
I would def…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x I like it! Its really good! I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned. What era is it? Modern?
Do you and livgiordano know eachother?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Whoops! I wish I could help you finish the dishes so you can come sooner…
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Are you working on your western?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Im on for an unknown amount of time. Might have to go shortly. Working on characters for The Crimson Cup.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Could you guys pray for the relationships in our family and extended family please? Can’t go in to specifics, but I would sure appreciate it.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@valtmy Praying!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Sorry, I have to go now. 🙁
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jess-penrose 🙂 Okay. Thats what I figured.
@filewriterbase13x No problem! I get the whole family rules thing!
@skredder I am working on “The Crimson Cup”.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jess-penrose What does it mean to be an aussie?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jess-penrose I am in Missouri. Its 6:44 right now. @skredder Where are you at?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jess-penrose Do you live in Australia?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x You know me, don’t you? 🙂 Where do you live, by the way? What time zone are you?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years ago
@rochellaine Its okay. I am still familiar with Min Ha Arets because I have listened to some previews/clips from Ruth and the other older albums. Did you know they are going to do Noah again? Maybe then they will have Noah available.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years ago
@rochellaine Also, do you know of anywhere I can get their earlier soundtracks like Ruth and Noah and In the Beginning? I can’t find them on their site. 🙁
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@ingridrd Oh my goodness!!! I would totaly keep reading! How could anyone put a book like that down!? I want to read the next part!!!
Um, yeah, great first chapter! Makes my first chapter sound as dry as the Sahara.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years ago
@rochellaine Okay, thank you. Its starting to make more sense. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years ago
@rochellaine Actually…I don’t know what harmony and melody are. Isn’t that awful? And here I want to be a singer. Could you explain it?
Most of being an actress is not being on stage! And just praying that God would continue to lead me, and make it clear what I am to do when.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years ago
@rochellaine Sorry, I had to go abruptly. Some of my favorite songs fron various shows are What Is This Grace?, We Need A Savior, and I’m Free! I love so many songs from Moses! Ugg, how could I name all my favorite S&S songs?
I am a soprano too! And yeah, some of those Jonah songs I love just don’t sound the same when I sing them. Is that cli…[Read more]
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