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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Actually, Joshua saves the goat although he really gets beat up in the process. He knows how much the goat means to the blind boy, because it helps him go places like a seeing eye dog.
This story is set in A.D. 31-33 and has the death, resurrection, and accession of Jesus in it. Is that what you mean?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Oh good! And I like B-bot. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…
Joshua’s fists clenched. The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet. His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd. The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Nice! Does Chara go to the hospital???
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys! I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. I enj…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira started the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
Okay, so I have this scene I need some help with. My MC is an eighteen year old guy who is returning home after not being able to see his family for two years. His family has thought him dead for over a year. What would these peoples responses be when he shows up one night: his Father, his Mother, his ten year old brother, and the elderly se…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet. Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. I will be on as often as I can!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@alia Am praying for you!
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
You know you’re a writer when the very presence of book is inspiring.
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Snapper replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Meant to say that I really enjoyed that last installment. 😛 I like how you portrayed me as that overly-protective, bad-cop type of dragon.
Because that’s what I am. 😉 😀 Awesome.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 I would love to, but I have to eat and then do some stuff before bed. 🙁 What is a word war?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@alia I am on, but I am not writing. I am actually watching all the videos that Josiah and Daniel made. Im about to die of laughter!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine No I never heard it before. Good morning!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine That song is hilarious! 😀
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 7 months ago
@the-real-kapeefer So, I am wondering who is older, you or Josiah?
And have no fear, @aratrea , we are all much more devoted to you. There is no chance of him ever taking over the Kingdom! *laughs at Daniels useless attempt*
BTW, how can you call yourself a real kapeefer? I have been on the forum only a month and I have many times over the a…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 6 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal @rochellaine Thank you very much for your advice! I agree, and will do so.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music 6 years, 7 months ago
@alia 😀 Thanks!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Go for it! Can you let us know what you come up with? 🙂 I like the lady in the videos. She seems sweet, and her voice is beautiful.
I am not much of a songwriter. I mean, I have written a few good songs with good tunes, but I don’t play any instruments or anything. My songs and tunes just come to me, like writing does.
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