Joseph Darkgrate

Here is a question.  How can I make my first chapter grab the reader, but also make it relate to the story and make my reader care about my MC?

@jenwriter17 Good idea!  Yes, tag more people please!

@skredder He had really good relationships with his family before he was taken away.  Good point!

@alia Thanks!

Ahck!  And now I have to go.  It wasn’t that you scared me off. 🙂  Might be on later.

@alia They just left, but I am here…

@rochellaine Yes, I read it!!  Its really good.  I hope you will finish writing it when you are done with your western!  My MC girl in The Crimson Cup – her name is Atarah!!!  Only she’s fifteen. 🙂

@rochellaine Yes, I read your comments to eachother.  I read all the stuff on this topic.

Who is Bobert?  I have heard of him before, but I don’t know who he is really.

@rochellaine PLEASE CAN I READ IT??!!!  Oh, man, I would love to!!!

Oh, I didn’t think about age!  Yeah, that would be pretty funny actually.  And difficult to explain that he could still be young and good looking when he was 98!  But,really, you should go for it.  After your western, course of.

@rochellaine Ack!  I have to go for now. 🙁 Hope I can be back sometime before tomorrow.  See ya then!

@rochellaine Wow!!!  Judas’ daughter?  Wow!  Can you hurry up and write it so I can read it?!!  That sounds amazing!

Yes, I have heard of Twice Freed, but I have decided not to read it until I have finished working out the plot for my own story I am writing about Onesimus.  Its hard though, because my friends keep telling me about it! :P…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Did you just become an Eccentric Mentor?  Congratulations!

@rochellaine Goodness!  You would think the ram would get the idea!

Ooooh!!!  Your stories sound so awesome!  How creative.

Does your NT story have Onesimus in it?

@jenwriter17 😀 Its one of my favorite scenes.

@rochellaine When were your biblical stories set?

@rochellaine My sister spent a couple weeks with some friends while they were lambing this year, and she loves sheep.  Then again, she loves alnost any animal, even rats and hairless dogs. :P. I don’t know if I like sheep or not.  We have never had tham.  I think they can be cute, though.

Yeah, I have seven stories set in ancient times.  T…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Here you are…

There was a scramble to be out of the road.  Some of the women left thier water  jars by the well as they fled, but Jerusha managed to keep hers as she dashed out of the way.  Then she stood and waited as the hard faces and gleaming armor of the legionaries passed, thier sandals sending up clouds of du…[Read more]

@rochellaine An indoor goat? Awww… Ours had babies several times.  They were smaller than our cats when they were born, and so cute!  And ours were pets, although they cleared a lot of brush and poison ivy for us.

*tries hard to think of another snippet I can remember*

@jenwriter17 Nice!  What is the name of this story?

@rochellaine I love goats too!  Do have any?  We had some little pygmy goats for a while, and nubians back when I was like five.