Rosey Mucklestone

@daughteroftheking Aren’t all writers secretly time travelers? 😉

@christi-eaton Thanks! (Also, side-note, I’m finally “officially” joining you in the theater department- I’m playing Mother Gothel in a brief comedy sketch with some friends for a 4-H competition 😀 )

@aratrea *grins* I’m glad you liked it! And change definitely gives a new…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking Thanks!

Also, maybe I should clarify that he’s not leaving leaving… mainly he’s stepping down from editor-in-chief; he’ll still be on the forum sometimes. There’s a post about it on the main KP website. 😉

@SeekJustice *pokes in* Heeyy, so I have no idea if you’re around or not? But I’m here-ish. 😛

Hi @spradlin! Ghosts are cool.

@Rochellaine yes! Agh, I love all those little things that he did. How he told his servants to pull out some of the pieces of their sheaves and drop them so she could pick them up. <3

@NotAWriter yess! It’s really cool that there’s so much information that we can each see in it. 😀

@Jenwriter17 like, no kidding this is basically a love-at-first-sight story. xD

@gh24682468999 It doesn’t sound too complicated. I can’t just take this limited information and guarantee it will work, but I think it can. One question: what’s the antagonistic force in this novel?

@Dekreel

oh my word

that’s all I have to say. xD

I’ve read chapter 1 and 2 now and agh yes. Something we can all learn from Ruth is that she’s such a hard worker. And a cheerful one.

Also, Boaz was so in love with her from the very first moment and I am totally shipping these two. XD

@dekreel These keep getting better and better.

@SlyLilHuntress 😀

@Dekreel Quite. XD

@SlyLilHuntress Welcome to KP! You have now gained many friends. 😉

@Dekreel 😀 And the Les Mis thing is hilarious.

@Dekreel It’s great! And I love my door. 😀

@slylilhuntress Read Brandon Sanderson (crazy amazing fantasy author). Also, Cry The Beloved Country (not fantasy, but very deep and heartfelt. The best Christian novel I’ve ever read). Oh, and read Dreamlander too! It’s amazing.

@Sam-Kowal ha! Well, remind me, and I will. ;P

And YES. Depth is everything. If you can boil your entire world down to a single deep, resonant core story/concept, so much the better for you. Hard to stress enough how important that is. Focus on what you have and make it so magical you don’t have to go look for other things to distract you.