Enid

@whalekeeper ^^

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Mateo

Mateo saw a figure place by, falling down. He went slung his guitar onto his back and walked to the figure. Mateo picked him up by the back collar and held him up to show to the likeable fellow. “Is he one of them?” His Mexican accent ringing strong.

@whalekeeper
Thank you! Maybe I should have tucked Alan’s elbow under the gate.

@keilah-h
Thanks for the tip on arm length!

@whalekeeper them nothing… *finger over the throat gesture*

@whalekeeper

Yeah, don’t worry about it, you need rest.

@whalekeeper

Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.

Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.

@whalekeeper Yes, you go do that.

@raxforge

I was waiting for either Syph to respond to Rax’s apology, or for @whalekeeper to start the class with Barnes as the teacher, but if both of them are busy, I can try to rp sometime soon. Maybe not tonight though.

@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…

@whalekeeper

What if I said everything 

Hm, I guess I would like to get better at writing more interesting, distinct sentences and showing more than telling. I think I’ve gotten a smidge better at writing okay sentences, but nowhere near as using excellent word choices or stuff like that.

I would also like to show my themes better instead of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator

I threw together a 9-point outline for Martha as well, since she will be a major point of view character in this book as well. It’s not quite complete, such as I’m not really sure what to do for her amplified pressure. But here is what I have so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Your figures look good. I usually do a harder outline around my characters to help distinguish them from the background. This was a tip I recall my Dad giving me a long while ago. The closer the object is to the front, the darker the outline should be. I also make sure my lines connect. If you’re asking about shading as well, I like…[Read more]

@whalekeeper, thanks for the invite! I joined Kingdom Pen about a month after Kathleen stopped doing these and was disappointed she didn’t continue, so I’m glad to see you’ve started this up again.

I would like to improve my writing discipline. I tend to get distracted quite a lot and often feel that I could be doing a lot more than I am. I find…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oops why do I do that? Lol. See above.

@whalekeeper ^

@whalekeeper

Yeah… 😳 I was seriously stressed out.

Lol XD

I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)

Thank you!!

Yeah folds…they’re really crazy sometimes… XD XD

@whalekeeper

You’re so welcome!! Yay, I’m glad you like it!! 😃🥰

@theshadow

It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD

@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢

Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.

@whalekeeper

*sees clean gesture drawing*

*is in bliss*

I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…

I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]