@whalekeeper
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin @hybridlore @whalekeeper
Rina
“Whoa!”
Rina heard someone yell as she hit the ground. She scolded herself for falling, for not being more careful. The four-armed person stood over her, holding out two right hands. “Are you alright?”
Her hand flew to her hood, and she let out a sigh of relief. Still there. “I’m… fine. Thank you.” She…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper
Netflix’s reboot of The Chronicles of Narnia should not stick to the original ending as it may alienate viewers due to its heavy religious undertones.
The current fantasy landscape calls for refreshing twists and turns, so Netflix must carefully decide which parts of the source material to keep and which to get…
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Loopy replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @hybridlore @whalekeeper
Liko
“I don’t know, are there?”
“Snacks? Yes there’s a cafeteria-”
A loud crash interrupted Liko as someone fell just a couple yards down the hall from them.
“Whoa!” Liko immediately dropped Dusty and ran over to help the person.
Dusty landed on the floor with a splat. After a pause, he rolled o…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
I know it’s so wrong.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Yes!! 😭
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @whalekeeper @loopylin
Alrighty! Here it is, then.
Rina
Rina walked down the hallway, one hand swinging at the side and the other glued to the handle of the blaster. She felt much too tense. Loosening up would be great, but she knew she couldn’t afford it. Anything could be on this ship! She’d never been on such a strange craft, and…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Here is a bit of this scene I wrote for my book @whalekeeper I hope you like it! I only write about a page and a half to a page everyday (which is really good for me now that we own a little farm.)
All down the freeway were broken cars and trucks. People were standing next to their cars, sitting on the roof and hoods, sitting inside. Everyone…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
So to anyone who is interested @whalekeeper might be 😀 , I have been working on my book pretty hard lately. (I don’t have to much time to write since we now own a kind of farm.) A half of page to a page a day is pretty good for me 🙂 Here is a little piece of my book. It takes place after all the power in the world goes out.
All down the f…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @whalekeeper @loopylin
Mind if Rina jumps in with your charries now? I mean, she can find trouble elsewhere but this way it will be more interesting XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Anika
“Are there snacks on this ship?” the boy/slime creature asked, absent-mindedly.
Anika still didn’t know what to make of him. He seemed a little weird, but sweet, in a little-brother kind of way. She glanced over at the mechanic, who looked a little distracted. “I don’t know, are there?” she asked him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper ok!
Tech
Science class had been…unimpressive, to say the least.
He’d left his seat to go search for his textbook, so that he could read that instead of listening to the teacher drone on about the properties of hydrogen and then yelling at Wrecker (who’d stood up on his desk and yelled “I like hydrogen! It’s flammable and can…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Project Chrysanthemum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper cool!
yeah, my brother’s a bit of a Minecraft daredevil like that too.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Villains in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper yeah I like most of them, too.
It was actually less about the killing in and of itself and more about the fact that it was sheer cold-blooded murder done by a virtually insane character…and I just was like “Okay, I’m done with you.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Villains in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper heh heh, yeah I think I only skimmed Mapleshade’s book once she started killing. The other books (Crookedjaw’s and the one where she tries to kill Sandstorm) I have read all the way through.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Can I insert a character of mine in?
One of them is probably boredly wandering the halls right now, even though he’s not supposed to be.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Project Chrysanthemum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Whoa, that’s weird! I looked it up. Little skulls all hanging from the plant…creepy, but also really cool.
It sounds like something from the Nether dimension in Minecraft……
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper yea, though I feel like Nyx would’ve caught on (especially being a fox) plus sometimes when it’s someone with an actual phobia u want to make sure their fear isn’t invalidated ya know? So I tried to make sure it wasn’t, and make sure Grimm and Jocelyn were caring and compassionate and not just like “suck it up, you’re fine.”
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Koshka replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Ah, worldbuilding. An interesting experience to be sure.
I do not have particular experience in magic systems, the only thing I’ve worked on with something like magic being a Tolkien-Narnian-Biblical-Wingfeather-Waylander dump world where randomness may spill into instead of my actual series. Overwhelmingmess though?
Tea and…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Sci fi AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Liko
“Yeah. I’m the repair guy.” Liko said, gesturing to his tool belt.
He remembered with a jolt the mess and the leaky pipe he had left unattended in the hall. He rubbed the back of his neck nervously and glanced behind him.
Dusty leaned forward in his arms and stared intently at the boy with the red shoe.
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Umm… I don’t know if this is one of my strong suits either, but I could try to help if you give me a few more details! Also, just, don’t worry about getting it all done at one point. Inspiration will come at different times, and you can always go back and change things in your first drafts, too.
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