Enid

@whalekeeper I was just about to come on here and say…

A flaw is not a sin 😅

Sin- an immoral act considered to be a transgression against divine law.

Flaw- a mark, fault, or other imperfection that mars a substance or object.

@whalekeeper

So you mean that an Active arc is when a character is overcoming their flaws and a passive one is when a character describes their own worth/I-can’t-think-of-a-better-word?

In that case I might only have one Passive character.

Flaws, flaws…how much they riddle life. Well, here’s a spiel. I used to be scared to write a flaw such…[Read more]

@whalekeeper AHHHH I LOVE THAT TIDBIT ABOUT ZOLTEN RELATING TO ARA’S INNER LEADERSHIP STRUGGLE!!! AHHHH!!!

@whalekeeper also…if what you’re saying is Active arcs are characters who basically say “I need to change everything about myself” (and they do that) IMO that would be a very negative arc/story.

Yes I understand people need to change…but that is through growth, not technically changing everything about themselves. Villains even have to grow t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hm…I’m afraid I’d have to disagree with you there.

You say that this in-between character would at first appear to be active, but in reality be passive, because they have “No flaws” in the end they are just influenced by others, etc.

And I can see what you mean…but as a REAL human being who has been INFLUENCED by others (bec…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooh, awesome! I love Narnia!! 😁 Haven’t read the rest of those, but I know of some of them… Yeah, me too XD It’s really hard to pick.

Cool! What’s the fictional world like? I’m assuming it’s fantasy, xD

Amazing, I LOVE sci Fi!! Fantasy is pretty good at times, too.. have you read KOTLC?

XD Yeah! I was just trying to think of different…[Read more]

Oops, forgot to tag people lol

@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @euodia-vision @smiley @acancello @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @literally-everyone

@whalekeeper

Hmm, interesting. It makes sense. There are many ways and categories for character development and arcs, which is a good thin as there are many Authors as well.

I think with people saying their characters are both Passive/Active they are actually referring to a character being Active in the A Story and Passive in the B Story. I have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @calyhuge @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @esther-c

Oooh, time for some brother pranks lol. And after this I’m good with moving on.

Crosshair

Magic phasing rock…..

Cool.

He’d only just gotten the hang of it by the time the fight was over. Such a shame.

But at least he could use it for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Interesting idea! Yeah, like @godlyfantasy12, I think most of my characters are a combination of those two.

@whalekeeper true, true (love having a brainstorm partner lol)

So…in this book, Ara is still struggling with past mistakes/decisions. She’s grown a lot since the first book (this is a series so there is growth in each book, wether it be good or bad growth) but nothing is fully gone yet. Now, though, she’s struggling mostly with the fact that…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oooh I like that! However…I like to think a lot of my charries fall under both umbrellas. Many of them are trying to survive the evil that’s been done to them, but they’re also having to overcome their own inner demons, sometimes heightened, or because of the evil that’s been done to them, make sense?

Where do those charact…[Read more]

@whalekeeper ooh love those points!! I don’t have a blurb currently (I probably have old blurbs stored away on my computer, but the story has changed so much they probably aren’t quite as relevant? Though most of it remains the same.)

Essentially this is what happens-

This takes place a few weeks (or a month or so) after the events of the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

I’m the one with Fynn in the dorm room. I just haven’t done any RPs for a while. XD

@whalekeeper

I am so happy you like them!! ❤ That means a lot to me, because I remember at some point you critiqued my writing, and I was a little self-conscious about the whole thing. So I decided to do better. Thank you for that little push, Min! (And if you have more advice relating to my writing, do not hesitate to wound my pride.)

Lol sorry…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude your writing is just so unique, like the whole image of Marcel and Seb is so clear in my mind 😂 I can’t get enough of your descriptions lol

@whalekeeper GAH MY HEART!!!!

so @everyone, I think I’m probably ready to move on to the next school day.

I’ll probably have it start, for Paxton, with him receiving a notification… the rest of y’all can do whatever but yea.

Who all is in our dorm again?

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c did @mineralizedwritings or someone else have a Charr…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @hybridlore @keilah-h

Do you guys want to still continue this?