Enid

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Lol, definitely no pressure. Sports are not for everyone. XD

@esther-c Tysm for your advice!! 💖 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else

Another Riker scene!! And, finally, a Leon scene😂💖 Because apparently Leon/Riker are still running free in my mind even tho I thought I would take a break from them. XD

(and I apologize for…[Read more]

@rae I like what you said about having certain habits.

@whalekeeper Interesting perspective, I hadn’t thought of it like that. I agree with both perspectives though, but for this character there is mostly a reason for why he’s serious.

@linus-smallprint The character’s name is Eldred, and he and his brother Percival are knights. He’s serious and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I stand corrected.

@loopylin

XD thank you! I’ve been trying really hard to make the dialogue realistic so I’m glad to hear you say that!

@whalekeeper

Thank you! XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks! <3<3

Not being active isn’t something to apologize for girl!! I don’t want you to be a internet addict lol

@whalekeeper

Alpha

“So…safety first, understand?”

Alpha smiled. “Of course safety comes first, that’s why I have this bandage around my ribs and you aren’t dead right now.” Whether he was sarcastic or serious, it couldn’t be told. Alpha placed his left fist over his heart, and bowed his head to the girl. “I sincerely apologize to you,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Alpha

“Press charges? What do you mean by that? Stars, this language and culture is confusing!” If this were a Realn, she’d just accept my apology, we’d salute and then move on. It’d be forgotten in an instant, but no, this girl has to use confusing terms!

@whalekeeper

Aw, I like little robot companions! They’re always so cute.

Alpha

Alpha stared at her, out of a mixture of wonder (for he had never seen in his life hair as long as this girl’s) and confusion (for he didn’t know what premeditating meant.) He mumbled something in Realn to himself, trying to figure out if ‘premeditating’ meant the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.

I can believe it

@koshka

Liko

“Well, that’s definitely a, uh, creative approach.” Liko squinted at the mess of duck tape. “Do you mind if I…?”

After a bit of shuffling, the man gave him enough room to reach the pipe. Liko then carefully began pee…[Read more]

I just found another song that is soooooo Alpha.

Whatever it takes by Imagine Dragons

That and Believer perfectly fit Alpha.

@whalekeeper

Apparently it didn’t post, but I like your charrie! She sounds great!

If you don’t like this introduction, let me know. It’s what I could think of to make Alpha notice her.

Alpha

“Speaking of combat,”…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper

…y’all should play volleyball… just sayin’…

Height’s always helpful in that sport… XD I don’t exactly have the height, I’m only 5’ 6’’, but I’m working on my vertical >:]

@beth-torres

Easton

He laughed. “I can’t be as specific, but yeah, we’ve been here for a few days.”

They fell into another awkward lull that Easton…[Read more]

@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @rae @savannah_grace2009

Sooo, question.

I am advertising Freedom’s Fire as a YA novel, and I wanted to know what y’all thought about that. I def know that my books aren’t middle-grade, mostly because of some content being for older audiences (hinted or even shown…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’ve been really busy today, so I’ve been slowly updating this post in bits of free time.

I believe we were originally created, and aren’t our own universal. Thus under God’s power we can be broken down into different parts – as before Adam, there was no Adam. But God doesn’t want this. We are consistent beings, not changing into ne…

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@whalekeeper

You’re welcome! 💖

Yep, that’s it!😂

@freedomwriter76

Aww thanks!!!!! That means a lot <3

@whalekeeper

Are the rubber bands the things that connect to your top bracket and your bottom band? because that’s what I have (though i can take mine out for eating and stuff). They hurt so bad and I hate them!

Braces just suck :/

@whalekeeper

🫣

I may have to get braces…that sounds horrible

Now I really don’t want them😂 but I also want straight teeth; such conflicting feelings.

I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]