whaley

@whalekeeper

Yeah, and I feel like it hasn’t been that long, lol. 😅 These years have gone by way too fast.

And wowzy! Happy early KP birthday lol!

@whalekeeper

woah that means mine must be 2 years too! Where do you see it?

@whalekeeper

But Turin and Edwin died.

I’m just telling the story.

lol.

We’re a good two-thirds (?) through.

I’m not gonna change what happened to them. That would change the whole story!

I’ll look back and try to add some fun scenes with Turin and Aaron…. if I can find an appropriate place.

Glad he’s reacting well.

I like how all his…

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@whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @theloonyone @stephie @theshadow @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

Awesome! This is perfect.

Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Can I get some of those Ten guy’s tags from ya? 😀

@linus-smallprint

AWESOME!

And that is why answering this question is hard.

No kidding!

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper

Ok, I have the next section, but before I go on I would like some feedback on the beginning stages of Aaron’s reaction to his grief.

That night, men and boys slowly trickled back to the large building. The Imperial…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

I will go start a form for this discussion and tag you both, along with some other people. Feel free to tag anyone I miss to it.

Whaley:

So yeah XD In conclusion I think girls and guys are different mentally, but the line can be blurred depending on the individual.

And that is why answering this question is hard.

@whalekeeper

None of that makes sense! haha! I can’t understand how you do that. I guess there are some blurred lines here and there. lol

HA!! It worked!!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here’s whoever I didn’t just send.

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLN4vwu8/ho7hf2rHakWJ1OTFshCmlw/view?utm_content=DAGNLN4vwu8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor

hmmmmm, strange. It worked. Then why has it been eating the posts every time I tag people………….

Let’s see if this works.

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!

Here are Aaron and Sabina

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLB5MuwA/CfZLSJQSuKkBbOXrIA6HDg/view?utm_content=DAGNLB5Muw…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for understanding. I just feel like all that would be too overwhelming and confusing for me. Ya know. I kinda liked how I had the setup.

Yeah, kinda like a mood board.

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is Turin y’all!!!

What! NO!!!! PICTURES ARE BROKEN AGAIN!!!!!! ACK!!

Ok, here is a view link…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else @I’m-too-overwhelmed-to-remember-tags-lolllll

I’ve been inactive on KP for the past several days, I know XXD It’s been a crazy past few days, esp…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint  @linus-smallprint

Also, anyone interested in character aesthetics?

@whalekeeper

Thanks for the thoughts! I’ll definitely try to work that in.

@linus-smallprint  @linus-smallprint

AHHH!!! I forgot to tag people on this new section! I was wondering why no one said anything!!! I’ll just re-post this whole thing.

Ok, here is the next (REALLY LONG!) section! Enjoy!!! I am hoping for LOT’S of fe…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh no! I’ll be praying for you. Is there any specific way I can be doing that?

yes!! Fire away!! I’m ready for it now! I think I’m prepared for people to criticize Aaron.

Your writing output is still so prolific, that’s great!

Aw!! Thank you! That’s so encouraging!

You killed the king and that made me 100% sad!!! WHY?!?!?! 😭…

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@whalekeeper

yes!! I would love more feedback! I’m so sorry if I made it seem like I didn’t!

I was having a rough day when the whole Aaron critique thing happened. 😅

please, go right ahead!! I would love your thoughts! Sorry I haven’t been tagging you! I thought you were no longer interested in this!

@whalekeeper

That makes sense, thanks for the advice!

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. Any ideas? – Ellette

The girls in…

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