@whalekeeper
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.
Thank you so much for the feedback! Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unrealistic cliche dystopian. I wanted the reader to be able to see why the government was this way, and for the gra…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @anyone else who wants to take a look
here’s the finished artwork! what do y’all think?

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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Honestly, their economic system makes no sense. They just have infinite money???
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper honestly I loved the worldbuilding, there was just one problem with it:
the fact that elves completely discount all human science. It doesn’t really make sense to me. As a person who’s very invested in science, I just can’t see how literally everything we come up with–every theory, every calculation–could be wrong. Don’t get me…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Yes! It’s back!
My love of dance has influenced my attitude toward critique a lot. It’s taught me to want corrections. One thing my favorite ballet teacher always says is that listening to your corrections is the best way to improve, and I’ve heard variations of this from the other teachers as well. The aforementioned favorite…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper I definitely will!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!!!
@whalekeeper lol it was my mom that made it, I just decorated it
@theducktator 18. It’s crazy. My dad had me sign some healthcare paperwork to confirm I’m staying under their plan and not splitting off to pay for my own, and my brother was like “Welp, now that you’re 18 you’re gonna have to start doing paperwork.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Aww, thank you! *He turns bright blue and bows*
The water Sprites dance is like what you’d get if you mixed ballet and Irish folk/cog dancing, with the added effects of water swirls following their every command. They move the water, and the water moves them.
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Andrew replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I wrote it seriously, but looking back at it it’s kinda funny, lol. I’m glad you found it funny
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hybridlore replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Great topic!
I don’t know, I’m sure they affect my writing a lot more than I realize. The one that has the most is obviously reading
but I don’t know if that counts. XDA lot of my projects for a while had something to do with space and flying starships, because I read Skyward by Brandon Sanderson and loved it. I guess that’s an…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
okay hahahaha sounds good lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
no I haven’t!!!
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Jaybird replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, good one! I recently learned a lot about how my brain works by comparing my drawings to my writing style. For instance, I like to find little details that describe a whole, whether that’s in water color or prose. Then I realized that I notice little things in my environment, to the point that I might miss something obvious…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper it’s actually looking really good so far! I have Sniper’s shading done and will start work on Medic soon.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m not super artistic, but I do enjoy photography, which is a form of art, so sometimes I like to mess around with photo editing to create potential covers (but the editing softwares I have don’t have great font options, so I don’t usually put any writing on them).
I also like hiking/mountains, so you won’t be as likely to find my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
well, my stories are mostly fan fiction anyway so that could be considered a part of it—like, I love (insert fandom) so much I can’t help but write stuff for it. Even in my original works, this bleeds through—Headstriker, Coal, and Chisel, some OC’s I created for a story I’m writing with a friend, were based off various combinati…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper oooh I like the skylight idea! I might use that, thanks!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator
Story 10!
Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper Hey, I noticed a thing. Did you change Seb’s last name?
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper Thanks <3
I like messing with the idea of a world where almost everything you interact with is alive and has its own character. It’s fun.
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