whaley

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@whalekeeper

YES PLEASE!!

would you…… would you possibly consider drawing RORY?!?!?!

I’d love to see how you imagine him!

You worries if you don’t want to tho. It can totally just be sketchy like the one you just posted. (I actually really like that look)

@whalekeeper

*screams*

YOU DREW THAT?!?!?!?!

I want to see more or barnes!!! That is so good!!!!!

@whalekeeper aww that’s the cutest <3

Is Barnes wearing her mask? I can’t remember what it looks like.

@whalekeeper aww cute! I like the style.

@whalekeeper lolllll

he loves those birds

honestly they’re the proof he still has a soul

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator

Finished what I know of the outline. You can use the same link as last time. Any thoughts or ideas to fill in the holes? What do you think of it?

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That’s alright, no worries. I get that a lot.

It;s not a bad thing! I love interesting people.

(I hope you didn’t take that wrong. when people say that to me it’s always in a not nice way. Sorry if I came across like that!)

@whalekeeper lol

@ellette-giselle I’m glad.

And I’m over here wondering if your cry of “crikey!” was just the first thing that came to mind or if you specifically chose it cause you thought I’d get a kick out of it.

If the second is the case, your presumption was correct.

If it’s the first and I’m over thinking it, ignore that.

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lollllll

I think I’m the oddest one out of my real life friend group, although I do have a friend who knows several ways to kill someone with a fork.

@whalekeeper   @loopylin

wHaT!??

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Funny thing, Whaley, I couldn’t make head or tale of YOU for forever!! Still not sure if i have.  XD

@whalekeeper

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

@whalekeeper

XD

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

true.

It’s just strange that we talk about these kinds of things as if we’ve actually gone through them ourselves. Crazy.

writer life!! lol

@whalekeeper

*realizes this is several pages back*

*shrugs*

Yes, I think it had to do with the helmet and nearly indestructible armor thing? Along with the galactic justice finder (although Leo is kinda on the other side of things if I’m not mistaken, but I haven’t actually seen The Mandalorian).

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you. I do try to…[Read more]

@grcr oooh a comic, even a short one, would be so cool!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper lollllll

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator (your late, but fine, I will let you join. Last one.)

 Here is the link to what I have done on my outline so far. I’ve just written down everything I am confident with at the beginning. I will add my ideas for the middle part and what I know of the ending later (Maybe tomorrow. I should have time…[Read more]