@whalekeeper
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
And if she was there (she does later have a confrontation with her, Callan and November) she isn’t at that place in her character to fight back );
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@loopylin sadly no XD
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Awww November 🧡 I really want Ara to show up and just smack Callan across the face. Probably won’t happen though lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yayy! I’ve been copying down the entire school rp into a google doc, and reading your old writing is making me miss your characters so much.
I’m glad you got to take a break, but I’m also glad you’re getting back into it :]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)
here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)
And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Hi gang!!!
SOOO As the title says I started writing again! Yay!
I just couldn’t get away from my series yall…I tried with the old Peter Pan story (which I love) but I just couldn’t get away from my WIP. But that’s ok cuz im finally getting words again!!!
I came up with an idea thats kinda working now! Writing all the scenes for one…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Yay, KP finally let me log in! XD
However, would you mind waiting until I start posting chapters?
I don’t mind at all 🙂
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
ugh, I am so bored.
Same. I should probably do Latin, but then I’ll be more bored.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
WE’RE IN THE AFTERWORD PEOPLE! WE’RE FAMOUS!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
The only place I rant about my characters or my writing is really on here or any other writing community.
I do tend to share a lot of mine with my siblings, but other than them, and here, no one gets to know about it.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
This is sooo good! Your writing is so beautiful.
I never show my parents anything other than funny short stories. I don’t think they’d dislike it or not approve…but having parents read my cringey emotional or romantic scenes…*shudders*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, definitely. I was just curious about the rights of Canada’s government compared to ours. They seem to be very close.
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!
I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜
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So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
I want to use was and were less. I’ve noticed this mostly in my essays. I’ll write sentences like he was, or this was, and in my last essay I eliminated a lot of those, and it sounded a lot better.
I want to get better at worldbuilding. That’s something that always gets neglected in my stories. I generally just make stuff up as I go along, but…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ha!
That’s kind of funny, but Julian would KILL anyone who did that to him.
Plus it seems a little cliched.
BUT, it was funny. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Got it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay, I’ll fix that. He was supposed to be joking. If he was joking would it work?
Sorry. Sometimes, I shy away from commitment and speak with uncertainty (that’s one of the ways my character, Eric, is like me). Maybe waiting until they are published would be a good idea, but yes, I will let you use them as a r…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah… 😅
That’s really interesting. Crazy to realize that this really isn’t too far off from what is happening in real life today.
In Canada, do you have the same guaranteed rights as in the US’s Constitution? I’m assuming it’s very similar. Freedom of assembly, freedom of speech, freedom of religion, etc.?
Oh yeah, there…[Read more]
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