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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ahhh!! Leo’s first encounter with Agents!!! 😝
Agents
Instead of being met by a wild rush, all the young Agent saw was a janitor. The fellow turned, and 225 saw that he could only be a year or two older then himself. The janitor looked surprised, but 225 was suspicious. Something wasn’t right.
The young Agent stepped into the closet, l… -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my word! I just realized that Leo and Rory started their relationship working on a team! (fixing lightbulbs) and now they’ve made full circle!
Their relationship could be a book!
This is awesome!
Aaaannnndddd Rory has come a long way. He did not trust Leo to begin with.
Rory
Leo looked at Rory a moment, and Rory fought…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I was skimming back through the RP and found one of Rory’s first encounters.
Made me laugh so hard.
Rory
Rory jumped and spun, aiming a blow at Hunter with his fist. He pulled up just in time and froze. “Hey Hunter.” He quickly opened his fist and made a waving motion with his hand. “Hi Hunter. Hello Hunter. Hey Hunt…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*gasp* He did not! OH MY WORD! HE CALLED HIM LITTLE BROTHER!!!!!!! 😍😍🥹
*Calms down*
I literally gasped when I read that. 😂
Rory
Rory started and looked up at Leo, his mind racing. Little brother…. the first born were the elite, making the younger siblings inferiors. Being called little brother was the highest of insults. But……[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@theducktator @savannah_grace20092 @trailblazer @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 17
Easton hated the tension that had hung between him and Tyler all throughout church that morning. They didn’t sit with the rest of their friend group like they normally did, which Easton appreciated. Last night had mentally exhausted him and getting up e…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
@theducktator Nice classics
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The Ducktator started the topic Fantasy Religions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
My world has two main religions, one evil, one based off of Christianity. I’m having difficulty with the second one, in particular naming the God, and figuring out how in depth to go as it’s not the main plot, as well as wondering how to avoid accidently falling into heresy. Does anyone have any tips for fantasy religions?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
I found two songs for Ryla and Ardon, a couple in my WIP. Happy Together by the Turtles, and for the end of the book, Paint it Black, by the Rolling Stones.
I should find more songs…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Nevermind, I double clicked and that worked.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m having difficulty with Proton. Do I have to download something to read it? It took me to a folder with chapters, but each individual chapter won’t open when I click it.
A friend told me that teaching me how to use tech was like teaching his grandma, and unfortunately, he’s probably right.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @raxforge
Aww, my pastor’s daughter has an Aussie she rescued. She’s hilarious.
Sypher
He gave a playful bow to the wriggling creature in Ellie’s arms.
“Honored to make your aquantance, you Blackjack.” He straightened, tightening his sash and grinning. “He’s a handful. Looks like great fun though, having an Animal.”
The…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Leo
The elevator closed after them. Leo punched in the number 2 button and leaned back against the wall. With a whirl and a rattle they began to decend.
He glanced over at the kid. Rory was quiet–quieter than usual at least–after the conversation over tile. Leo noted the way he subconsciously gripped the side rail. Not very…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m so happy kp decided to work today. Honestly I was ready for it to just shut down completely yesterday lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @koshka Blackjack is an Australian shepherd puppy btw @whalekeeper
Ellie
“Go ahead! He’s real friendly. Good luck keeping him still, though.”
Sypher only managed to get in a few pets before Blackjack darted off again. He ran another lap around the group before pausing and sniffing at Ben’s legs. Ellie scooped him up and held him for…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Those were really fun to read! I love your writing style and I’m really curious about these characters’ stories now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’ll try to read it if I have time (I know that sounds terribly unreliable, and it is terribly unreliable, but it’s the best I can give you)
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
And for y’all’s information, we have just reached over 12,000 words on the completed chapters doc.
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hybridlore replied to the topic What were your first written stories about? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Oooohh, this is such a fun topic. I loved reading y’all’s ideas. And @trailblazer, I know that game! We have it, I think. The story is really cool.
The first story that I ever wrote (that I can remember) was about a cat. I don’t remember the cat’s name (or his friends’ names) but it involved rescuing another cat from a tree and the most anticlima…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @whalekeeper
The final two chapters of Part 1 are out! I did tag a few of you on Docs, but I just wanted to let you know on here since I didn’t post yesterday. KP wasn’t working. 🙁
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