Enid

When the villain tells the captured hero all their plans only for the hero to escape when if that IDIOT villain had just killed the hero to begin with, their plans wouldn’t have been spoiled.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, but if there’s a lot of plants, chances are there’s a lot of animals surviving off of that, which means the wolves shouldn’t be having much trouble finding food.

You could just take out this sentence:

The wolves growled, but they were hungry, and they decided the threat was worth the potential kill. The winter had been…

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@ellette-giselle

XD

Oh really? Hmm. Maybe I could at least get a very rough draft done for him.

@highscribeofaetherium

Awww!!! S0o cute!! I really like that! You do good with people! Those proportions are good!

@elishavet-pidyon

How dare you.

🤣

Nah, I haven’t killed any of them in my mind because I don’t think @freed_and_redeemed would ever actually do it.

@whalekeeper

Sure, why not.

Don’t know how active I’ll be on it. Everything in my world changes today, so we’ll see what happens.

@koshka

You WILL write Leo’s book. That is the draft you will finish.

I have decided.

@linus-smallprint

ugh. KP is grounded for bad behavior.
🤣

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing them.

huh. I haven’t really thought about it. Well, I g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

oh yes Leon.

huh. I mention that a lot of what the people are eating is vegetation and wolves don’t eat that.
odd that it was confusing… 🫤

is there a better way to word it you think?

@elishavet-pidyon

yes. That is appropriate sound effects there. 😂

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

woah!! What makes you say that? 😅

lololol. I wrote this before reading those. Yes, perfect archer name.

as for Leon… we shall have to see.

@whalekeeper

Ok sounds good!

I would, but I’m focusing on writing and not editing for these next few months.

@elishavet-pidyon

Thanks 🙂

@loopylin

Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

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@whalekeeper

I’m game 🙂

Ugh, this camera is terrible at taking pics of alcohol markers. Why does it look so streak-y and faded 😭

I wanted to draw a girl with a mushroom hat. So I did. I think it turned out pretty cute.

Please ignore the random dark splatters, idk where those came from.

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m hoping to actually finish a draft this summer. Just not sure which project…*glances nervously toward glowering characters*

*Whispers* I think they’re hanging up on me.

@whalekeeper

That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.

@whalekeeper

Yes!

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬