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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes, but not anyone that we know.
yetJonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,
So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey, I was right.
Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.
If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
well, one thing, it made me decide I NEVER would want to ever play minecraft. That game would bore me out of my mind. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, first off, I was really annoyed by the time I got to it. Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.
I liked Purple and The King’s story, and I knew at once that the boy…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Because the King and Purple’s stories are amazing?
Did you not like it or did you just not find it sad?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
yes….
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
All of them? Including Noteblock Universe and The King?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
So not to take this over again, but I watched the animation vs. Minecraft
So…. why was I supposed to cry?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Just did the math, and the entire Baron Chronicles (at 1,500 edited words per half hour) would take me 11.7 hours!
Which means I may or may not go over 12 hours tomorrow cuz, for one, I know it’ll probably take me a little longer and two, I have another short story that I’ve had on my mind related to the Baron Chronicles but will not be published…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey!
So last year I wrote for 12 hours on July 1st, and I kinda want to do it again if I can. It turns out perfect cuz it’s actually supposed to rain where I am tomorrow so I have an excuse to stay indoors.
I am going to add editing and writing this time cuz The Baron Chronicles needs some more editing love (haven’t done much since…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ve been on KP like a year and a half by now, and I have never seen anyone be that way to another writer here. Most the time, I actually feel like people don’t criticize my writing enough on here. So yeah, maybe people are like that other places, but I’ve never seen it here. Maybe some jokes, but never anything serious.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
WHY IS IT SO RELATABLE!!!!!!
I feel like that last one is definitely how people come up to me after reading some of my stuff…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sounds good.
Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. 😅
Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.
You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
All good things, hopefully?
I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.
Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey! I’m doing pretty good, how are you?
No worries, I know the end of the school year is chaotic. 😂 I’ll add you to the new doc!
Thanks! Glad you like him. 😅 He’s one of my favorites too.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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