Enid

@keilah-h

Wait! Really!!! Wow! Thank you so much!!

Everyone else did such a good job!! Wonderful drawings y’all!!

well…… dis anyone else call next character? If not, I would really love to have a go!

@linus-smallprint

do it’s an alternate reality. For instance, the Empire is Rome set in the German alps with Germanic people.

Ardenta is a French-Swiss cross in culture and people with more of a French-Scotch lowland setting.

Vendailia is an Anglo Saxon Britton cross.

so yeah, basically takes place in our world if some of the countries were s…[Read more]

@rae

I actually recently wrote a short scene somewhat like this, where a character’s arm got shot by a poison arrow and he had to have an amputation. Basically I did it from the amputee’s part until he blacked out and then from his bystanding friend’s standpoint. I definitely think you should go with @ellette-giselle ‘s idea, but to build on it…[Read more]

@keilah-h

No, the formatting seems normal here.

As for dresses, I kinda hate ’em but that doesn’t mean I’m not concerned about being modest. No way. I wouldn’t wear none of that revealing nonsense a lotta kids these days wear if you gave me a thousand bucks.

Same here lol. Bring on the knee-length shorts.

@ellette-giselle

I am very easily…[Read more]

I drew myself with my apatosaurus stuffy

(based mostly off vibes. I did not look in the mirror)

@rae

I second @ellette-giselle, but I would probably make the larger portion of it Mandin’s, and then a shorter scene/s from Nahim’s point of view. Being inside the mind of a character who’s depressed and delirious can be disorienting (wow, alliteration there lol.) Except if the rest of the book is from Nahim’s POV–then, it might be better just…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I think the art of respectful disagreement is completely lost in today’s society. Or maybe… it’s just called maturity. XD

AGREED!

 

Hi Min!

Yes, Thankfully I have found it the same here! For me I used to not really speak what I thought when asked. I would just shrug or brush it aside, but I started feeling guilty about it. I came to the place where I knew I needed top say what I really believed. So I did. And the first time I did I was nearly blown to pieces with the…

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@rae

Ooo, I love these scenes. I find it most satisfying as a reader if you do a mix of both. Go from one point of view to another. Keep it fluid, but let us feel both characters struggles and grief.

So like this:

Good sized chunk about Nahim. (two to five paragraphs i would say, or somewhere around there)

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Good sized chunk about…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I guess so.

Probably should put some tags on this:

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @calyhuge @linus-smallprint @theducktator @esther-c @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @idk

@stephie

Aw, thank you! That really means a lot to hear you say that!

Yes, @linus-smallprint is mean for doing that, (lol), but the cliff hanger wasn’t a huge shock. I kinda started to suspect and I guessed she knew something about his parents the minute she got all weird about his name. I need you to hit me with something harder if you want…[Read more]