Enid

@anyone

(I’m posting this here cuz I don’t want to make a whole new topic 😛 )

I’ve heard mixed opinions on this, so I wanted to hear what y’all think. Do you find it annoying to read stuttering when it’s written into dialogue?

I ask that because some people suggest to indicate that the character was stuttering by the dialogue tag. The probl…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yeah it was really good!

@mineralizedwritings

Yesss! For some reason I loved that movie too. (:

@whalekeeper

While I am more emotional objectively than Linus, being a girl teen and all, I do not like sharing my feelings or even physically expressing them through tears. I am an extremely private person and I do not like to look for sympathy from anybody; it makes me feel guilty. I tend to cry in private.

One side of me would like to be c…

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I also forgot that you guys talked about this on this thread so I posted a different reply in the other topic.

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

I’m kind of bored and I just wanted to pop in on this conversation cuz I find it really interesting!

If my brother were to accuse me of not caring (which might actually happen), I would get even more frustrated because I would want to care more, but find myself unable to.

YES THIS IS SO ME! I mean I’d definitely…[Read more]

Maybe it wasn’t in this forum…but I know I heard it somewhere, lol!

Did I just hear that most girls want to be held and comforted?!?!?

I’m not like this AT ALL!

I prefer to sob on my bedroom floor by myself and when my family comes in I pretend like I’m fine XD

and then when I do work up the courage to tell someone what’s bothering me…

I do not want to be held…I want someone to tell me how to fix the probl…[Read more]

Johnny

Johnny wondered at the dragon’s words. Destroy cities? Kill people? He shouted over the whipping wind. “Uh, we weren’t really planning on… whole cities! We sort of… just want to become top dogs at school! Assert dominance!” He realized he was talking to a female and explained. “It’s sort of a male thing!”

El Burro pointed. “The eagle…[Read more]

@felicity

Oh my goodness hey!!!

Oh, good luck with that! Sounds like fun and uh stress… lol.

Aw thank you 🥰🥰

@kathleenramm

Hello,

I’m not sure if we’ve met yet, but I hear you are the fix-it hero of kingdom pen. The images aren’t working when we try to post pictures. They just come out as white boxes.

Like this.

Any ideas?

Thanks so much!!

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

One afternoon, Aaron was sitting on the edge of his bed, studying his Bible, when Noah stepped into the room, a Bible in his own hands. “Aaron, can I talk to you?”

“Yeah sure,” said Aaron, motioning to the bed.

Noah sat down. “Aaron, I was reading through the Bible, cover to cover as you sugge…

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Psssstttttttt

does anyone wanna get this up and running again?😅 I won’t be super active, esp with school starting back this month or the next, but I really wanna practice writing characters besides Leon/Riker because I’m struggling😂😂

so does anyone wanna get this back up and running?

@ellette-giselle

🙂

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

At last, the curfew was slowly lifted and the citizens were allowed to return to a more normal life. Never were they allowed to leave the city. The Imperial soldiers began causing problems, turning families out of their homes to accommodate the Officers. All of the large building taken to quarter…

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@mineralizedwritings

Wow, it sounds like you’ve got an awesome family!

The best in my opinion. 😀

Yeah, I understand, and thank you for the support. Sorry if I misunderstood you.

@whalekeeper

I think Min means (and she can correct me), as long as you are writing well from a moral standpoint, sharing with your family is really up to you. You don’t have to if you don’t feel like it. ‘Character crimes’ such as an overly emotional guy are up to your personal preferences and can work for a story’s tone.

I mean yeah that too…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow, it sounds like you’ve got an awesome family!

Sorry if I was projecting a bit. Despite my family being Christian, they can be really critical. Kinda like what Whaley mentioned above, over preferences for the most part. People who have it like me have to band together and support each other, so whenever I see somebody saying…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Noah knew he was dead, he just didn’t know that Aaron was there when he died. Does that section need to be re-written to make that a little clearer? He’s not confused, he just was asking Aaron why he didn’t tell them that he had to see it happen. That’s rough, you know? You can’t just bury that one.

Yes, he did write in his…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, honestly, if you were to show some good parental interaction along with the bad, and show as the author that you don’t believe the while children know best thing, then I think you’re set.

Oh that’s awesome! I bet that was so fun to see her again! And her husband too. Hope you had a great time! I’ll probably have to cut…[Read more]