Enid

@linus-smallprint

Whoa. There is nothing else in my book that causes it to stand out?!?

There’s a lot that causes your book to stand out. All of the different species you’ve come up with, for example, and the complex characters. The plot is original, your narration is funny and fresh, and thus far it’s a unique story!

We all really just want a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Tell you what. One of you draw a picture of this and I will see if I can work it in somewhere.

You’re so mean.

I don’t draw dogs, or anything in the dog family if I can help it. It never looks right.

Whoa. There is nothing else in my book that causes it to stand out?!?

I hope you know I was joking.

It would be a killer…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep reptiles. (My younger self meant gentiles.)

Is he allergic to corn or something? Our dog was lactose intolerant as a puppy, but he can handle smaller doses of dairy now.

Oh gracious. The baton one is probably my favorite. XD

@linus-smallprint

I did a few more tries on the cover with fonts. How about these? They seem better!

And yes, I would put the numbers on the side. The series name and number feel to crammed on the top.

Okay, good. I’ll work off of the third one.

1.)

@ellette-giselle

I’m glad you enjoy it! We are writing it as an exercise, but we’re posting it for y’all’s enjoyment and to give us accountability so we actually finish it.

@hybridlore

Thanks! It’s been fun to play with.

Ah yes, I love that chapter mostly for it’s snark. XD

Alpha being awkward again.

@loopylin

Remember when he left money under Dante’s pillow after hearing a little girl talking about the tooth fairy! XD

@whalekeeper

Nar

She sighed. “I guess. What is the matter with my family! Alpha is…well, Alpha. Nathan is so nerdy you can’t hold a decent conversation with him. Marco is just an idiot and Nar is so cute that you can never say no!”

“You got that right. Those blue eyes, chubby cheeks and little button nose are adorable.”

Nar swung around in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Awww, they’re so sweet.

He’s pretty much perfect.

I suppose I always saw her with longer hair, but she’s adorable. XD

There was that cynical look in his eyes. I had seen it once or twice in my imaginings of Travenor, but somehow I never caught how pompous it made him look. I shook my head. Surely this poor chap wasn’t my character. That wasn’t possible.

Right?

He looked down at a paper in his hand. There were fantastic runes on it. I gaped a lit…

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@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

I love it! Such a cool idea!!

@mineralizedwritings  @elishavet-pidyon  @koshka  @anyoneelseiforgotwhowasdiscussingthis

Okay, after are little conversation about Faramir and Eowyn, I decided to draw the REAL them.

What do you think?

@linus-smallprint  @stephie

I KNOW!

Linus, make some little kid hug Stripe, or we poor authors will be driven insane by the beautiful mental picture and lost opportunity that you sidestepped!! That one scene will make these books famous! If you leave it out, the books will slide into the shadows.

You have been warned.

lololol

@elishavet-pidyon  @koshka

Oh you two are amazing! I’m so honored that yo0u’re writing this and ten posting it just for me!! All those others who didn’t decide to read this are MISSING OUT!

This is how even the people online know I’m tired.

@linus-smallprint

@ellette-giselle

My goodness.

linus-smallprint

Now that I’ve read ellette-giselle ‘s suggestion about a little kid hugging stripe, I can’t stop picturing it. That would be so cute!

@koshka

Leo is greatest! I wish I could steal him and put him in my book.

Rory

Roy looked up at Leo. The tone he used when he said “your’s wouldn’t be the first government I’ve made mad.” and the grin on his face made Rory burst out laughing. Then he began crying again and then started laughing. He choked and put his hands over his face.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!

I couldn’t help adding the last one. I love it.

@ellette-giselle

Leo

He’d been right.

“Rory, sit down please.” His voice was low, calm. “There are no cameras in this hall, or mics in this room. I’ve checked before for Quincy. So unless you’re bugged yourself, we’re still good. Which, if you are bugged, don’t worry. I’ve worked pest control before. There’s only One all-seeing, and He happens…[Read more]

@koshka

what was one more wanted poster?

Ooo, I like that!

No, I’m about to go listen to it tho!

Rory

Leo Looked down at Rory. “Now Rory, are you in danger? Your friend you mentioned, is he? I’m here if you need a friend, and if you need help. And I can help.”

Rory choked on a laugh that ended in a sob. “Am I in danger? Leo, don’t you under…[Read more]