Enid

@ellette-giselle

I’m not exactly sure if I agree with you about God ever wanting Christians to lie, but I get that you’re voicing your own beliefs and I understand why you don’t want to change it. However, just be aware that it might be a slightly controversial topic.

Anyway, I love the plot twist. Great job with the details leading up to it…[Read more]

@jonas

They are hollow inside, right?

@rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridelore @ellette-giselle @grcr

I’m sorry for not RPing, it’s been busy the past couple of days.

Ben Gunn, Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

The entire time of this happening, Ben and Flare began this following discourse:

“We must abandon them, they are causing too much noise, guards will be storming the place.”…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Yay! Freakiness is the intention :]

And yes, lots of world building. And re-world building. I still have zero plot tho

Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore

@ellette-giselle My character doesn’t even have military training. She’s just… very determined.
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @rae

Felicity— Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand

“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to, but she didn’t care…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So, I think I can safely say which scenes you have added in and which ones were in the draft. I’ve run into this same problem several times. If my book is more then a year old when I do the re-writes and big edits, you can always tell what I wrote before and what is added. I think our style and skill develops the more we write,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh. You are not the first I’ve heard to say that, but I don’t mind that you don’t agree. Sabina does voice my own beliefs however, so I won’t be changing this.

I would be interested in your reasons behind why you don’t agree with her/my reasoning. Though keep in mind I won’t be changing this scene, so if you find it a waste of…[Read more]

@rae

Don’t look at me.

My guys are just normal people with some military training.

@whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Leon and Julian —Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Julian looked up and his eyes widened. He yanked Leon back. “Look out!”

Leon spun, gripping his sword tightly. His eyes and mouth opened in shock. “What are t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the best ones yet!!

I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?

This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)

Very well done.

@jonas YES!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @loopylin

Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed, before coughing once more. After which, he harnessed the wind once again, throwing the strong wind at the foremost figure, trying to knock it over. But nothing appeared to happen to the things. Brutus gave a cry,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yes, it’s the Iliad and the Odyssey as a musicale and it was SO WELL done!

oooo, next chapter! Yay!

@linus-smallprint

BOTH!

hey, how did you know?

dun dun dun!

@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

LONG Section!!!!!

Darrien lost his job the next morning.

The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.

To e…

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Well I was going to jump into that fight scene, but now I’m stuck again

@anyone

So, I just read Pride and Prejudice for co-op, and now I want to watch one of the movies. Which one is the best one?

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus held his drenched scarf up over his nose, his eyes shifting to the boy. He didn’t speak, he merely looked the boy up and down, before breaking out into a few coughs. Recovering himself, Brutus walked over the form of the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

YES!!!!!!

Now I feel happier that you said Ronan looks like Darcy.

@grcr

Thank you!

@whalekeeper

Wasn’t exactly what i was going for, but okay. I can see that.

Which Pride and Prejudice version? (there is only one right answer.lol)