Enid

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@koshka

How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?

I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?

lolol.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”

“Oh…

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@hybridlore

Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.

Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@theducktator

*doubles over in agony*

Gahh! I’ve been struck! I’m dying! HELP ME SOMEONE!

I now have 650 words to write, and after that, you can bet you’ll be receiving a portion of my 26 snowballs (:<

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, it’s Leon. I’m so glad my favorite has finally re-stolen your heart. Seriously. If you can concede to that much, I think I can like Riker as much as Leon.

Just watched Klaus on Netflix and it is the cutest Christmas movie ever I want to watch it again already

@freed_and_redeemed

where there is deep grief there was great love

This references his wife, right? YOU DIDN’T KILL ANYONE ELSE, RIGHT?????????🥺

I finished my 350 words. They’re on paper, but here’s a snippet:

Being chained to a wall and forced to learn history was possibly the most miserable start to a morning ever. Burnt toast did not help either. Jorin sighed. Malzor was a terrible cook, or maybe he just didn’t care whether Jorin was well fed or not. He could almost taste his fathers’s…

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@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness. 🤯

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, I never read the prologue you posted…sorry. I’ll get to it this weekend.

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

@raxforge

lol